[R-Play tester] [R>Proofreader] Looking for a Proofreader and Betatester

iOtero

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Aug 4, 2020
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Project:
- THAMAR
-A visual novel in English and Spanish developed with Ren'Py and DAZ.

Developer:
- iOtero

Looking for:
- Proofreader and Betatester. I need a proofreader and betatester of the english version of the game. I'm doing the translation myself, but I'm Spanish and I'd like someone English speaking to proofread it and check the game.

Employment Type:
- At the moment I can't pay anything, but if the game is successful, and the review is good, we would negotiate an amount per chapter published, and the first chapter would be paid too, of course.

Work commitment:
- I also expect the commitment to the work to be serious and lasting, as my behavior will be too.

Preferred method of contact:
- Those who are interested, please open a conversation in this forum. The form of subsequent contact would be by email preferably. I'm not yet familiar with Discord, I still have to learn it.

Job Description:
- The first chapter of the game is finished and I'm starting to translate it into English. They are not going to be short chapters, it doesn't go with my way of doing things.

- About the game, here is the FAQ I have prepared to publish on Patreon, Subscribestar and F95Zone:

---BEGIN FAQ---
Thamar 0.01 data:

929 renders for the game.

+ 1101 renders for the game videos.
33 animations.
5 videos.

46 characters, 40 female and 6 male. Almost all of them will appear with different ages.
2,04 GB


This FAQ is made so we don't waste time asking and answering the same questions over and over again.
Depending on the questions asked by the patrons and supporters, it will increase over time.
Please read it before asking.

What kind of game is THAMAR?
It is a visual novel that tells a story that can be played by making decisions.
It is a game in which the story takes a different course depending on the decisions made by the player.
All the decisions made by the player in the game will have their corresponding consequences.
All the decisions that will be made in the game will have at least one alternative. There will not be a decision like "Open the door" without a corresponding "Don't open the door".
If a character in the game is going to kiss another character, she will do it without the player having to click on the "kiss her" box on the screen, which would be a pointless waste of time.

Will patrons be able to influence the game?
Of course they can. Each time a new chapter is released, there will be a poll, or more than one if necessary, about how to continue the next chapter.
The survey can be related to any aspect of the game, the script, the aesthetics of the characters, the paths to follow, etc.

Is there going to be a THAMAR walkthrough?
No, it is not necessary. The game includes a hint system, activated by default, that will help the player to make important decisions. This hint system can be deactivated in the Options menu.
This game is made for the player to enjoy, not to drive him crazy trying to figure out where he is going.

How many characters appear in THAMAR?
THAMAR features, for now, 46 characters, 40 female and 6 male. Many of them will appear at different ages.

Who is the main character of THAMAR?
The protagonist of the game is Thamar, everything revolves around her, but she is not a typical protagonist. This game does not have an exclusive protagonist or "MC" on whom ALL the weight of the game falls.
The main characters of the game are Thamar and Daniel but, depending on the path the player follows, they may not even appear.
The other 44 characters in THAMAR will tell parts of the game from their point of view and will also present the player with decisions to make.

Can the names of the THAMAR characters be changed?
No, only the player's name.

How often will updates be released?
At least once every two/three months. The release schedule will be determined by the game and the amount of content I can include in each chapter.
I don't plan to make tiny updates of 150 or 200 renders to update every less time. I will update when I feel a chapter has been completed.

Does THAMAR have animations?
Yes, the game includes animations and videos.

How many good endings will there be in THAMAR?
At least, there will be six. The total I don't know yet, it will depend on how the game evolves.

Are there bad endings in THAMAR?
Yes, there are bad endings, but they are short and humorous. I have put them so that bad decisions have a consequence.

Is there voyeurism in THAMAR?
It's not that there will be voyeurism in the game, it's that THAMAR IS VOYEURISM. Voyeurism is my personal fetish and I have tried to make it present throughout the game.
As there are many more female characters (40) than male (6) in the game, voyeurism is mainly based on women, but there is also voyeurism on men. In THAMAR there is no prejudice on this subject.

Is there interracial sex in THAMAR?
Yes, in the game there are characters of different races and they will have sex with each other. There is no racial prejudice in this game.

Is there lesbian sex in THAMAR?
Yes, in the game there are female characters who are lesbians and male characters who are homosexuals. And there are also bisexuals. In THAMAR there are no prejudices on this subject either.
So there will be sex between women, between men, and between men and women, both in couples, threesomes and even group sex.

Is there VIOLENCE in the game?
No. There is no violence in THAMAR, neither physical nor psychological. There is not the slightest violence or abuse. And it is not foreseen that there will be. This game is kind and loving, not violent.

Are there any limits to the sex practiced in THAMAR?
None, except the one that involves violence, that is, there is NO SADISM or MASOQUISM or anything similar. It would not fit with the rest of the game.
In the game there is vaginal sex, oral sex, anal sex, masturbation, threesomes and group sex. There will be blowjobs and cuninlingus.
There will be handjobs with feet, with tits, with thighs, with hands and with everything possible to do them.
There will be heterosexual, homosexual, bisexual and transsexual sex (the latter only if approved by the patrons).
There will also be sex between characters with a significant age difference.

Is there a HAREM in THAMAR?
Yes, there is a harem, but not the "classic" harem.
In the different paths of the game there will be characters who have sex with several characters at the same time, both of their own sex and of the opposite sex, therefore, they will have their own personal harem.
Now, if we understand harem as one character fucking the other 45 characters in the game at the same time, then no, there is no harem.

Is there NTR in the game?
No. There is no NTR, it is not a theme that matches the personality of any of the characters. As I've said before, this game is kind and loving, and so are its characters.

Are there pregnancies in THAMAR?
Yes, at least one pregnancy is planned in the game. As the game progresses there may or may not be more.
I know that some people like the main character of the games to get pregnant every woman he comes across, but THAMAR is not that kind of game.

Is there urination in Thamar?
Yes, there are, but they are optional. If the player does not like such scenes he can avoid them.

Is there bestialism in THAMAR?
No. There is no bestiality in the game.

Are there mini-games in THAMAR?
No. There are no mini-games or sandbox scenes.

I have downloaded the latest version, but where can I find the previous chapters?
All previous chapters are included in the latest version of the game. Over time, if the game becomes long enough, this may well change so that you don't have to download huge files.
---END FAQ---

Additional comments:
- The first job of the proofreader would be to correct the FAQ, of course. :D

- If, after reading the FAQ, you still have any doubt you can ask me here.

I have been asked for some images of the game, here I put some of them:






 
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Dr. Psychedelic

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Hi great detailed post you made
Also pls add some in-game pictures to give people a better view of your game
I would love to beta-test and proofread your game but I'm having pc problems right now but in future if you need help just ping me here or message me I'll gladly help
 

iOtero

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Aug 4, 2020
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Hi great detailed post you made
Also pls add some in-game pictures to give people a better view of your game
I would love to beta-test and proofread your game but I'm having pc problems right now but in future if you need help just ping me here or message me I'll gladly help
Thanks. I'll keep it in mind, I haven't translated it yet, so there is time ahead....
 

iOtero

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Aug 4, 2020
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Hi great detailed post you made
Also pls add some in-game pictures to give people a better view of your game
I would love to beta-test and proofread your game but I'm having pc problems right now but in future if you need help just ping me here or message me I'll gladly help
I have added some images at the end of the main post of this thread, after the FAQ, can you see them?

I ask because a friend has sent me a conversation telling me that he can't see them. Thank you.

I do see them. :unsure:
 

neto00740

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Good evening, if you're still in need of help I'd like to volunteer, if you want DM me and I'll answer ASAP
 
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iOtero

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Good evening, if you're still in need of help I'd like to volunteer, if you want DM me and I'll answer ASAP
I thank you for the offer, but I'm still in negotiations with other members who have offered and we may already be complete, although I don't know for sure yet. In any case, I will keep you in mind. Thanks for offering.