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Dec 10, 2017
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1. If you do not like the story, then most likely the game is not for you, many on the contrary note good jokes, perhaps some are lost in the translation into English, but it is already difficult to translate.
2.Compare 0.0.3 and 0.0.4 (the gap between them half a year) if this is not enought for you, there's nothing we can do for you.
If you are so naive and you have a unfortunately overexcited, forced to disappoint you, we have a slow corruption in the game and no one will let you fuck the main girls for 5 points or a handful of coins. If you need games just jerk off, go play other games, for example on a 3D render or honey select, there you will be able to quench his thirst.
In our game there is a lot of eroticism, and pornography will be at the final stages or in the middle, depending on the choice of a branch of communication of the character
1. The writing just ignores all the rules even a rookie author should follow to make a pleasant reading experience. For specifics, refer to the first post you quoted. There are good guides and references freely available on the internet for "Writing 101", please read them for the sake of your patreons. The same is true for the comedy. There are methods to make good jokes, but you never use even one of them. The stuff you improvise is just too tasteless and not witty at all.

2. Your game had a significant overhaul, but dont insult the people supporting you by claiming you work fast.

What annoys me is that you claim that you make something not intended to be sexual, but you at the same sell it as such. Just look at the two images you use for the main menu, first with Hermoine and now Daphne. There is no way a person seeing those and reading the description for your game would think "Well, there is probably no teenage sex in this game, and wont be for a while". You clearly make a promise to potential players by implying that there is sex, and that it is a major focus.
It would be a bit better if the writing was actually good, or even OK-ish, but it is objectively(!) terrible, even as fanfiction. Which it isnt, it is a commercial product.
 

Khan

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1. The writing just ignores all the rules even a rookie author should follow to make a pleasant reading experience. For specifics, refer to the first post you quoted. There are good guides and references freely available on the internet for "Writing 101", please read them for the sake of your patreons. The same is true for the comedy. There are methods to make good jokes, but you never use even one of them. The stuff you improvise is just too tasteless and not witty at all.

2. Your game had a significant overhaul, but dont insult the people supporting you by claiming you work fast.

What annoys me is that you claim that you make something not intended to be sexual, but you at the same sell it as such. Just look at the two images you use for the main menu, first with Hermoine and now Daphne. There is no way a person seeing those and reading the description for your game would think "Well, there is probably no teenage sex in this game, and wont be for a while". You clearly make a promise to potential players by implying that there is sex, and that it is a major focus.
It would be a bit better if the writing was actually good, or even OK-ish, but it is objectively(!) terrible, even as fanfiction. Which it isnt, it is a commercial product.
1. I understand you lovers of fanfiction and most likely on Harry Potter, such as you hard to talk, because you have a love for any particular style of presentation and you all impose. The game is initially developed in Russian (as more than half of the team speaks Russian) jokes may get lost or English speakers will not understand them. This is the first game and style of writing for us and has improved so much with version 0.0.1, for example - we are gradually evolving, but it is not easy. If you are not satisfied with the text, just do not play, do not waste your time, we will not beg you to play.

2.We have already described that experienced difficulties in the production of the game, but art we can not draw faster than now (because it is high quality and requires much more time than crafts made on the knee)
The game is a gradual corruption, if you still do not understand this, you should try to read my messages written earlier.
No one of our website, forum, etc does not say that we have a porn game.
We its here also not posted on this forum. On Patreon written - a game for adults, what is meant by adulthood. Or do you offer to redraw the pictures in the menu when the game is ready in the style of porn?
We do not promise anything to the players, only the patrons, so we ask you to refrain from downloading and passing alpha and beta versions, because they will spoil your impression of the game, but you still will not listen and will say what we are bad.

And I'm not gonna see the other half. Doing the same conversations with the npc's to get friend points got old fast. would be nice if you could track the stats on them. I don't mind grinding when i can keep track of my goals and it's reasonable. And when the player get punished for being aroused, at least put in some art of the reason you wouldn't be able to learn something. I'm a very visual person so i won't take your word for it^^
But don't let it get to ya, it's just my opinion and probably some people don't mind hours of grinding for a small reward
The game is still in development and we are working on the addition and improvement of the content.
 
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Constructive criticism of this game would maybe be the way to go?.
While I might have used harsh words to emphasize just how bad it is - in my opinion - I also pointed out the flaws and a possible solution.
The dialogue is still wooden and just bad on many levels, there is way too much needless exposition, the characters - even the ones lifted from original HP - are all weird, none of the jokes are funny or follow any comedic structure and the overall concept of the story is confusing and poorly thought out. None of this would pass a proper round of editing.
There are good guides and references freely available on the internet for "Writing 101", please read them for the sake of your patreons.
The main problem of this game is the author, the strong points are the art and coding. Unless the author seriously steps up his game, there is little room for it to miraculously become good at the end of development.
 

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May 30, 2017
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Has anyone actually gotten the "visit a bedroom to get the swimsuit off drying rope" to work? I did the "gain trust" path (use broom, pick Daphne twice), and I've been able to talk to her about the swimsuit (the scene where she shows the school swimsuit). After that however, the walkthrough says to talk to the Hat for a hint, but he offers nothing, and when I go to the bedrooms on the days specified (Daphne/Slytherin on Tues, Luna/Ravenclaw on Thurs, Susan/Hufflepuff on Sat) there's no swimsuit - interacting with the drying line just gets the "leave it alone" and "go through the underwear" options, neither of which gets me anywhere.
 

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Has anyone actually gotten the "visit a bedroom to get the swimsuit off drying rope" to work? I did the "gain trust" path (use broom, pick Daphne twice), and I've been able to talk to her about the swimsuit (the scene where she shows the school swimsuit). After that however, the walkthrough says to talk to the Hat for a hint, but he offers nothing, and when I go to the bedrooms on the days specified (Daphne/Slytherin on Tues, Luna/Ravenclaw on Thurs, Susan/Hufflepuff on Sat) there's no swimsuit - interacting with the drying line just gets the "leave it alone" and "go through the underwear" options, neither of which gets me anywhere.
From what I've gathered reading the thread and playing myself, the walkthrough is longer than the current content. In other words you can't complete everything that's listed. I might be wrong and just missed something in game. But that's my $0.02
 
May 30, 2017
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Apparently those sections no longer show up in the Google Docs version of the walkthrough, which just makes me wonder how the hell it got there in the first place if it's not actually in the game. Who created the walkthrough anyway? The only thing that would make sense is if they had access to an early build of the game (or at least script) that hasn't actually been released yet.
 

RowanPG

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I like the art and story but the grind is way too much.
Most frustrating the fact half the time you didn't learn something in class cus of some upskirt (you don't get to see) or something making it even harder and the walk back and forth to the bathroom to jack off or the library is useless due to too high arousal. 2 hours into the game and i saw 1 (man)boob and got a kiss. Sorry but i'm gonna waste my time on another game. I'll check back in a year or so. Best of luck to the dev.
You're talking about the wrong HarryPotter parody game there friend, the game you're talking about is Wands and Witches not innocent witches....

BTW I'm loving this game. Can't wait for more :D actually gonna become a patron for this game.
 
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You're talking about the wrong HarryPotter parody game there friend, the game you're talking about is Wands and Witches not innocent witches....

BTW I'm loving this game. Can't wait for more :D actually gonna become a patron for this game.
Guess i owe someone an apology. I should stop posting things around 3 in the morning
 
May 1, 2017
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Hello everyone! People help please! I'm stuck on swimsuits quest. Daphne show me school swimsuits and... nothing. I go to their rooms with Minerva... nothing. I burn phoenix every day ( pure bird), but can't do anything with Hermiona.
I read Walkthrough, but can't understand with what magic I can get Hermiona swimsuit :( Pleeeeeease!
 

tarzan999

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I can't speak to Daphne about it and the hat only has the option "Nevermind"
Have you spoken with the portrait on the wall? Have you purchased the broom? Have you read the documents on your desk? It's really hard to help you like this.. Also, try to send a "unofficial" letter to Snape.
 

Khan

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Hello everyone! People help please! I'm stuck on swimsuits quest. Daphne show me school swimsuits and... nothing. I go to their rooms with Minerva... nothing. I burn phoenix every day ( pure bird), but can't do anything with Hermiona.
I read Walkthrough, but can't understand with what magic I can get Hermiona swimsuit :( Pleeeeeease!
Thats all for this version if you see Daphne or Hermione swimsuit, you can choose only one girl in this event
 
Aug 6, 2017
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Hello. I think this version has a Bug: once you are playing dont let you save. Just give you the option "Continue" But without giving you the option to save, just leave. I dont know if this is because you are in the middle of a quest or what.
 

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2.70 star(s) 36 Votes