alexajke

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A writer who won't accept editing is a bad writer. All writers need an editor of some kind. Unless Tobie thinks he's better than Shakespeare (he isn't). His "writing" is killing this game. It's overwrought, tedious and full of cliché.
Well, I had two discussions with Tobie about writing and its quality in the game (One somewhat around mid-march of 2017 and other in January of this year).
First was about the pre-rework version of this game, everyone who was around then remembers quality of its writing. And I had to argue with no effect about why MC name should not be Salazar Riddle Black! Everyone who at least had read the books should how bad it is and in what type of fanfiction this type of name appears.
And the response for my question "If the quality of writing will be improved in future updates" , that I'd got back then from one of the devs was literally "This game is not business, this is our creation (as art). It is important to us to implement our ideas, not to make successful game dev company". This is the core of the all bad things that are in their game, they are a bunch of unprofessionals who don't want to improve and in the same time want to get that sweet sweet money.

The second one was about the re-worked version game. The discussion was about one particular dialogue in the beginning of the game between Dumbledore and Hermione. The main point of that discussion was about Dumbledore being to OOC and misrepresenting to the point that it was not Dumbledore anymore but some old bearded guy with funny clothing. The whole dialogue was dismantled to single phrases, it was shown that "Dumbledore's" reactions was fully OOC, there is no way that Dumbledore that we know will mumble something and back off to defend himself while speaking with Hermione. Some people might argue that it is within writer's rights to portrait characters as he likes, and I agree, but when this representation changes so many character's key characteristics to the point that they are literally could not be placed near to that character's name without strong dissonance. There was even two rewritten version of this dialogue, which one was hugely accepted by local community as far superior to what was in game, but effect was literally zero. Same answer, "I'm the author, I see that way". You can't argue with people like that, it's fruitless and will only consume your time and energy.

P.S. To those people that think that it's OK to do that kind of character rework I will say this.
If writer is not careful instead of Dumbledore(dialogue from above) there will be some old bearded guy, instead of Hagrid (which was harmless, somewhat charming in his own innocent way) there will be some huge perverted imbecile, etc, etc. In the end there will be literally nothing from what made Hogwarts so appealing to many of us. Instead there will be some magical school and some horny people inside it with popular label placed above it, so people will go and buy (donate to) it. But hey, that's OK, there are no problems, everything is fine. After all, Disney is doing the same thing to Star Wars.
 

JoeBanks

Innocent Witches
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After all, Disney is doing the same thing to Star Wars.
You went from Harry Potter to Star Wars... maybe you take things too seriously? If you are linking Disney's rework or adaptations of the Star Wars universe to a lewd game, I really have to question your approach on the topic as a whole.
 

alexajke

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Jun 18, 2017
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I really question when people have a game, that's actually a game and has puzzle elements that your biggest concern is the writing.
Because between "action" elements of this game there are tons of bad text that you are ether forced to read or to skip through.
If you are reading it (and the devs intend it to be that way) - you get more then half of your game experience filled with facepalming and/or cursing. I would not call this great time spending. If you are skipping it (and the devs intend it to be this way) - why include this walls of text at all? To make Tobie stroke his ego?
Ether way, quality of text is very important to VNs, especially to that kind of novels with such great amount of it. And if one of the game elements (graphics ) is very good/excellent, it does not mean that we should overlook other bad one.
 

iFrog

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Jan 13, 2018
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Can anyone please tell me if there is any porn in the game yet? I remember having this game a while back and i fell in love with the art, but there was no porn at all. Are there any yet? I'm very curious.
 

alexajke

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Jun 18, 2017
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You went from Harry Potter to Star Wars... maybe you take things too seriously? If you are linking Disney's rework or adaptations of the Star Wars universe to a lewd game, I really have to question your approach on the topic as a whole.
My approach is simple - both Disney and Sad Crab are milking their respected franchises with little to null respect for what made them great and loved.
If you remove every mention of Harry Potter franchise from Sad Crab game - character names, their looks, etc - the popularity of this game will drop dramatically and devs know this, so they keep the facade, but inside this sweet good looking wrapper paper they carefully place their "art", which is (if you exclude graphics in both cases) is barely passable.
 
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botc76

The Crawling Chaos, Bringer of Strange Joy
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Oct 23, 2016
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Oh great, my posts get deleted again.
Some of the mods here must be patreons of this game considering you can't say anything negative about those, even if you are not talking about anybody on this forum specifically.

I'm sorry, but what's true must be allowed to say, so I will say it like this.
I would have to question my own intelligence, if after all this time I was still supporting those devs.
My pride, my brain and my guts told me ages ago that money supporting team Sad Crab would only be wasted and there are many games far more deserving of that support
 

JoeBanks

Innocent Witches
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May 5, 2018
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Is there much content in this yet?
nah, not HC wise. I mean there's content text wise but then opinions seem to be either end of the spectrum. Absolutely people love it or hate it.

But 1 HC scene, girls in bathing suits. Some tits. Puzzles. Oh and you can see the tutorial chick naked or in outfits.

I haven't seen a lot of middle ground on this game.
 

JoeBanks

Innocent Witches
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May 5, 2018
828
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Hi guys anyone has a save with whats done? Wanna check how far is it now. tks in advance
This games very linear, you can enable the skip mode and it will take you to the end but content has been added in the beginning etc....

So by taking a save at the end, you basically miss content.
 
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philphil020

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There's a point where one would be better off writing an erotic novel than making a game. Innocent Witches passed that point 50,000 lines ago.
Sad crab, youre good with text lines. We all get it. CG are nice too, we all can see it. Now it is time for something else. We want some actual erotic scene...erotic game u know.
 
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NemisXue

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So their Patreon appearantly has the v0.1S for Mac but I honestly am not going to pay for it considering how they seem to be milking it for adult content would someone please update the OP with links for the Mac v0.1S also whats with all these trolls in this thread just shit posting to every comment or post. It is like they don't got a life outside of this one thread.
 
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RedPillBlues

I Want to Rock your Body (To the Break of Dawn)
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I remember play this game 2 years ago, and there were no scenes; 2 years later, no scenes. I think the game needs a text based tag, because that's were 100% of the content is. This game is basically a Akabur game with slightly worse writing, and somehow even less scenes.
 
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botc76

The Crawling Chaos, Bringer of Strange Joy
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I remember play this game 2 years ago, and there were no scenes; 2 years later, no scenes. I think the game needs a text based tag, because that's were 100% of the content is. This game is basically a Akabur game with slightly worse writing, and somehow even less scenes.

"slightly" is doing Akabur a disservice. I mean, I laugh about some of the jokes in his games.
 
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