VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hypno Town [v0.1.6 SE] [Chunky_Pleb]

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Sinndallas

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Dev is here.
Guys, you're totally destroyed me!
However, I try to improve my game using your criticism.

1)Translation.
Yeah, I'm not a native english speaker, it's obviously.
I plan to do proofread of game's text at future. So, it would improve the text quality.

Also You were so mad at "occasional car crash"!
It will be better to use "accidental" instead of "occasional", am I right?

2)Graphic
How do you think, what is worse: backgrounds or character? But, please, don't say "them both":)
My backgrounds are really lack of details, cause I'm not an environment artist.
Do you hate cel-shading at anime-style, cause it's the popular point of view? Sorry don't get it.


3)Gameplay
At the next version I plan to make scenes with feral pokemon, probably Arcanine. May be it would be interesting for you.



That is a very helpful advice, thanks!



These are free and might help you out with grammar. I haven't even checked the game itself I'm honestly just going based off of others and the description of the game.
 

Chunky Pleb

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Feb 18, 2018
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Clearly a missed opportunity for a nice mind control game :FeelsBadMan:
Mind control will be necessarily at the game. However, I want to make a "prologue" before.
After all it v.0.02 and MC didn't find the Hypno yet. :)
Please, be a little patient.

Dont get sad about all the criticism, cell shade is not that bad i have played alot of games with it and it gives an "anime look" that i like, we all have different tastes so continue with your work, there are just few pokemon games and we need more.
As someone already suggest it will be nice to add the female characters of pokemon universe getting some fun with pokemon, like leaf (female character of fire red - leaf green) having some fun with arcanane or stuff like that.
Keep the good work and cheer up!
Thanks for positive feedback! Yes, I will try to make more sex scenes with women and pokemon. Pokemon series always were full of bestiality :)




These are free and might help you out with grammar. I haven't even checked the game itself I'm honestly just going based off of others and the description of the game.
Thanks! Honestly, I used 3 different online grammar-check servicesm, but they were not enough, as I can see now.
Anyway, game's text need to be edit by english native proofreader, I clearly understand it now. So, I already contacted a few appropriate people. Next version of the game should surprise with "no error" text, I hope.

Has potential. Will be keeping an eye on updates
Thanks for your kind words! I'll post here the information about my releases at future.
 

The_fallen_dragon

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Mind control will be necessarily at the game. However, I want to make a "prologue" before.
After all it v.0.02 and MC didn't find the Hypno yet. :)
Please, be a little patient.


Thanks for positive feedback! Yes, I will try to make more sex scenes with women and pokemon. Pokemon series always were full of bestiality :)


Thanks! Honestly, I used 3 different online grammar-check servicesm, but they were not enough, as I can see now.
Anyway, game's text need to be edit by english native proofreader, I clearly understand it now. So, I already contacted a few appropriate people. Next version of the game should surprise with "no error" text, I hope.


Thanks for your kind words! I'll post here the information about my releases at future.
Are you the maker of the game? If so regardless of what people have been saying, keep at it. What is important is that you're enjoying making this game.
 
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kxxx

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While I do like that someone finally decided to make a pokemon porn game, the models really do look off. I haven't played it yet so I can't talk about the game per se, but I really think you should try and edit them a bit before the game gets bigger and the whole model change becomes more troublesome.

I'm not into 3D modeling or anything so I can't really give pointers on how to fix it, but I hope you can do it and that the game ends up being a success as I think the idea has potential.

Good luck with it, and here's hoping we get to see Delia in it someday.
 

Goblin Slayer

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Thanks for positive feedback! Yes, I will try to make more sex scenes with women and pokemon. Pokemon series always were full of bestiality
Thats the spirit mate! cant wait to see the new scenes with woman and pokemon ;)

BTW is there a chance to add the sister as a playable character? like pokemon games that let you choose a male or female.
 
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Jrakan

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Aug 21, 2017
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Jesus, I dont understand why people are looking forward to see women with male pokemon sex scene. You already have a male MC so male pokemon would ruin the game unless you want to have some male on male pokemon action which I hope people are against it.
 

bobjones9792

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As other's have said, this is pretty bad art AND dialogue. Just some advice, but its important to understand though that you don't need amazing art to have good porn, you just need it to

A. Resemble a human enough to be sexy.
B. Dialogue/writing/context that appeals to whatever turns the player on. Since this is pokemon, corruption, mind control, enslavement, and monster girls are obvious fits here.

Since you are using RPGMaker, here's a different idea, why not do sprites (little chibi girls/guys)? RPGMaker naturally supports sprites and sprite animation, and VH (violated heroine) was an old RPGMaker game that still managed to be hot even when it initially had only sprite sex. You don't need amazing writing skills, or even great artist skills to do a sprite sex scene. A decent-looking chibi sprite can literally be done in MS Paint, and only needs 3-9 frames of 'animation' to look decent. Just provide enough context so its not simply a collection of sprites doing it, and ideally a "standing model" that looked good and some variety in her expressions, and you could have a decent game that is under-represented here.
 

anschwww

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Ver.0.02 was released for public.

You can download it immediately here:



(a very, very small update ;))
 
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Chunky Pleb

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Feb 18, 2018
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(a very, very small update ;))
Thanks for a quick response! I did not write yet at f95 about the new release.
However, I don't think it was a "small" update. If you want to compare current public version 0.02b with previous 0.01, there is a full changelog list:

  • All text errors were fixed by editor(!)
  • 2 new characters: Mallow and her pokemon Tsarena
  • 3 new locations
  • 5 new dialogues
  • 3 new animated h-scenes(+1 scene at special version)
  • Map system for moving through city
  • Quest journal
  • All text errors were fixed by editor
  • Character images were improved for Hilbert, Hilda, Hilda's mom, Nurse, Mallow, Tsareena.
Just some advice...
Thanks for feedback, but it looks like you want a completely different game!
I don't use RPGmaker at developing Hypnotown. So, I don't have any experience with sprite graphic.
But the most important thing is that I want to improve at my own developing direction.
 

dartred

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so judging by the name of the game and your name in game. hypno can also go around screwing women? is it like "get to the girl, before hypno does"?
 

Instre

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May 22, 2017
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I played a lot of games before and this is a prety good game i have to say kip up the good work dev
 
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