VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hypno Town [v0.1.6 SE] [Chunky_Pleb]

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Mistress_Kixen

Engaged Member
Jun 12, 2017
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Wow just wow, just opened the game and looked at the art style and it looks like someone was using MS paint with some of it.
 

nashk

Member
Apr 9, 2017
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Look I can overlook bad art. I one of those guys that can get into the writing more than the art, but that translation(?) is awful.
 

morpheusahrms

Active Member
Sep 11, 2017
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Guys, don't be so hard. Poor dev :-(
Yeah, I know. But something about the art style (possibly in conjunction with the topic) seems to trigger a lot of negative response in many people. Not entirely irrelevant feedback for the dev should it reach him. Hope he finds his target audience and wish him good luck.
 

Chunky Pleb

New Member
Feb 18, 2018
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Dev is here.
Guys, you're totally destroyed me!
However, I try to improve my game using your criticism.

1)Translation.
Yeah, I'm not a native english speaker, it's obviously.
I plan to do proofread of game's text at future. So, it would improve the text quality.

Also You were so mad at "occasional car crash"!
It will be better to use "accidental" instead of "occasional", am I right?

2)Graphic
How do you think, what is worse: backgrounds or character? But, please, don't say "them both":)
My backgrounds are really lack of details, cause I'm not an environment artist.
Do you hate cel-shading at anime-style, cause it's the popular point of view? Sorry don't get it.


3)Gameplay
At the next version I plan to make scenes with feral pokemon, probably Arcanine. May be it would be interesting for you.

How to make pokemon porn:
Have sex with the women of the universe.
Have the women of the universe get fucked by pokemon
DO NOT PUT YOUR PENIS IN A POKEMON
That is a very helpful advice, thanks!
 

King Monkey Mon

The Perverted King of The Harem Masters
May 16, 2017
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Guys, don't be so hard. Poor dev :-(
i love getting hard however this game doesnt do it for me ironically leafonfire does get me hard always wanted to skull fuck chuckys wife

Nice! finally a game based on Strokemon...

dickachu is the work of nightmares XD

Oh, now you will tell you wouldn't get some of this gardevoir pussy :p:
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out of the new pokemon i prefer lopbunny

@melsant

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fuck it ill take both of them theboogie makes some great art :heartcoveredeyes:[/QUOTE]
 

Ryahn

Birb Skull Fuckery
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Please refrain from double, triple, quad, etc posting. Use multi-quote when possible and edit your previous post.

If you cant edit your post, please wait for someone else to reply or ask a staff member to merge your posts.

EDIT:
Since you want to play games and go against staff. Enjoy
 

RedPillBlues

I Want to Rock your Body (To the Break of Dawn)
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2)Graphic
How do you think, what is worse: backgrounds or character? But, please, don't say "them both":)
Tbh your backgrounds are the least of your issues, way behind even the bad translations. The most glaring issue is the horrific looking models.
 

Malkav

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May 28, 2017
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"How to make pokemon porn:
Have sex with the women of the universe.
Have the women of the universe get fucked by pokemon

DO NOT PUT YOUR PENIS IN A POKEMON"


That is a very helpful advice, thanks!
I am biased towards my own taste and was just trying to be funny. You may find that your audience do in fact like having the pokemon sexualized (like fury or pony pornography)

Don't let the opinion of close minded person like me hold your back :coldsweat:
 
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mesoru

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Sep 22, 2017
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Uhm what is this? Is this a pokemon game that we don't get to play as a Hypno? Surprising.
Clearly a missed opportunity for a nice mind control game :FeelsBadMan:
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@King Monkey Mon, i must say my range is quite wide, lopunny (and mega form) being among the top ones. And yeah, TheBoogie has bonerific material :heartcoveredeyes:
One of fave is also GalaxyOron, artist has quite nice porkyman stuff :heartcoveredeyes::
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Nice! finally a game based on Strokemon...

Good lord, this pikachu is nightmare fuel for me even nowadays.
 

Goblin Slayer

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Aug 4, 2017
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Dev is here.
Guys, you're totally destroyed me!
However, I try to improve my game using your criticism.

1)Translation.
Yeah, I'm not a native english speaker, it's obviously.
I plan to do proofread of game's text at future. So, it would improve the text quality.

Also You were so mad at "occasional car crash"!
It will be better to use "accidental" instead of "occasional", am I right?

2)Graphic
How do you think, what is worse: backgrounds or character? But, please, don't say "them both":)
My backgrounds are really lack of details, cause I'm not an environment artist.
Do you hate cel-shading at anime-style, cause it's the popular point of view? Sorry don't get it.


3)Gameplay
At the next version I plan to make scenes with feral pokemon, probably Arcanine. May be it would be interesting for you.



That is a very helpful advice, thanks!
Dont get sad about all the criticism, cell shade is not that bad i have played alot of games with it and it gives an "anime look" that i like, we all have different tastes so continue with your work, there are just few pokemon games and we need more.
As someone already suggest it will be nice to add the female characters of pokemon universe getting some fun with pokemon, like leaf (female character of fire red - leaf green) having some fun with arcanane or stuff like that.

Keep the good work and cheer up!
 
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