VN Ren'Py Abandoned High School Crush Simulator [v0.6.1] [Bright Sun Studios]

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I just posted a poll on my Patreon page to decide on which character(s) the next update should focus. When the poll is done, I'll let you guys here know the answer.
 

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at this point.. 2 ways...
1 - you make a review
2 - you put the whole thing under a spoiler
this also goes for who want to quote your comment of course :)
Heh, yeah .. you're right. Donezo now. Gotta be honest - by the time i finished that post i just thought "fuck it, i need sleep, gotta reread that tomorrow" ^^"

And just because she isn't into you, doesn't mean we don't get to see her have sex.
- It seems that you're not a big fan of all 3 girls, and that's totally okay. Maybe one of the girls that will be added in the future will be more to your tastes (or one of the guys).
Just as a disclaimer: While i like me some wincest, i can do perfectly fine without. I was just joking about the perfect porn-set-up - that gets blindsided by "yeah, but she's not into us or girls in general".
I also wouldn't say i'm not a big fan of the three girls. Ava is cool and Ella would be too. It's just that one piece of her story that turns me totally off on her - like a nagging feeling of "ok girl, why you do that, what's wrong with you?", you know? - else she'd be an insta-lock for me.
And while Charlotte isn't exactly right up my alley, your writing alone will still make me play her route and enjoy it. So, in a sense you're doing better than Bioware lately, ha! ^^
 

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I just created a non-Patron exclusive Discord server that anyone can join. If you want to join, here is the link:
 

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I played it and I liked it, so IMHO it's a good job.
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Can't afford to patreon it now but if you have some spare coins, don't mind on spending them on this developer.
 

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I played it and I liked it, so IMHO it's a good job.
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Can't afford to patreon it now but if you have some spare coins, don't mind on spending them on this developer.
As always, it's good to hear someone enjoyed my game. I'm also quite happy with your feeback, since it's rather unique (none of the points I'd heard before reading your post, but you make some strong points) and actually useful.

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Thanks again for your feedback. It was really helpful.
 

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So, I started playing this, but chose to stop after reading through the school rules. Unfortunately, they preclude all of the things that I think would make this game fun for me (public nudity and sex).

That being said, I did have one issue that I think should be looked at, and that is the font. In my opinion, something needs to be done to make it stand out more, as I found it difficult to read, especially in those moments where the text is nothing more than an ellipse.

Good luck with this one.
 
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So, I started playing this, but chose to stop after reading through the school rules. Unfortunately, they preclude all of the things that I think would make this game fun for me (public nudity and sex).

That being said, I did have one issue that I think should be looked at, and that is the font. In my opinion, something needs to be done to make it stand out more, as I found it difficult to read, especially in those moments where the text is nothing more than an ellipse.

Good luck with this one.
'Nothing more than an ellipse'? Do you mean like a dot (this thing -> . )? I'm not sure what you mean with that. I found the font quite legible, but that might just be me. If more people start making comments about this, I'll certainly take a look at it.

As for the school rules... they're there to be broken, right? There currently is no public sex, no. But there will be. People who've read the game will probably already have figured out which character is ripe for public sex.
The school rules are just there to make the school look at least a bit more realistic. The MC will probably break some rules though. There is even a school rule against dating teachers. That doesn't stop me from planning to add one of the teachers as a love interest, right?
 
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for this version, you can start relationships with Ella, Ava and Charlotte. You can see them naked in the bath. Is there any other content I've missed that is available? Like anything at work places? Anything to be done in the principals office, or through that blue door? Or any upgrades beyond beginner sex toys?

Also, i get errors when reading books. Is there a cap of when a book can be used, like if you have too much of a stat, you can't read a book any more to increase it? I have no idea, but I have to rollback or ignore when I try to read on my balcony.

Eagerly awaiting future updates. I'm a fan of all the girls! I'm also a futa fan, so certainly looking forward to more Ava content.
 

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As always, it's good to hear someone enjoyed my game. I'm also quite happy with your feeback, since it's rather unique (none of the points I'd heard before reading your post, but you make some strong points) and actually useful.



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Thanks again for your feedback. It was really helpful.


I wrote a long and developed answer and my browser froze… And I'm too tired to write it again, english isn't my native langage and it's quite a hard exercise.



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Sorry for all the mistakes, I'm really really tired.
 

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Aww I started playing this just so I could do stuff with the sexy looking one wearing the blue demin jacket as she has some nice small breasts only to find out that you can't do anything with her:'(. Is there going to be any content with the dog that you can adopt? I named him *Doggies got your bone right here*. I thought Ava was a futa her facial features kind of looked malelish but so does Charolette.

How can someones slut score be above average if she's a virgin? Wouldn't her score be below average? Named the MC Crystal pistol.
 

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Aww I started playing this just so I could do stuff with the sexy looking one wearing the blue demin jacket as she has some nice small breasts only to find out that you can't do anything with her:'(. Is there going to be any content with the dog that you can adopt? I named him *Doggies got your bone right here*. I thought Ava was a futa her facial features kind of looked malelish but so does Charolette.

How can someones slut score be above average if she's a virgin? Wouldn't her score be below average? Named the MC Crystal pistol.
More content for Michelle is planned of course and as it stands she seems to be a favorite in the patron poll about which character the next update should focus on. She will get her own friendship link (the 10 conversations you can have with a character), but it just won't end in a relationship with her.

As for the slut score, a lot of people seem to be misunderstanding what I mean with this. Maybe I should rename it to 'libido' in the future. The slut score is not a measure of how many sexual partners someone has had. It's more a measure of how much their mutation is affecting their sexual behavior (including sexual curiority and masturbation). She's above average because her parents tried to repress it, and now she can suddenly sexually explore whatever she wants.

And lasts the pets. The cat of course will certainly have more content added, because it currently doesn't have any. The dog might get a bit more, we'll see. I suppose they might feel a bit empty know because some of the content created for the dog has been removed due to potential issues with Patreon. I think you can imagine what kind of content that was in a sexual exploration game featuring a dog.
 

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I'm not sure if you missed anything, since I don't know what you've done in the game. There is currently nothing interesting to do in the principal's office, there are only the 3 sex toys, but... the blue door can be opened. I suppose you'll just have to wait until someone figures out how.

But here are some things you might have missed: Did you find the cat and dog? Did you go to Ella/Ava/Charlotte's room after starting a relationship with them from the school courtyard menu? Did you buy the laptop?

And I am aware of the bug with one of the books. 2 of them can be read perfectly fine, but onces you've bought Love & Passion Guide you can no longer read. This will be fixed in the next patch/update. There is no cap to how much a stat can be increased either. The bug is simply because of a typo in the script.

EDIT: I've also attached a file to this post that will fix the bug for you. Just put the books.rpy file in your 'game' folder and replace the file already there
 

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Instead of removing it you could of just made a patch for it to add the dog content into the game and then had it uploaded somewhere for download like lewd patcher. Guess I'll go back and kick the dog off the school grounds instead of adopting it since there's no real point in taking it home then as I only brought it home as I thought there would be sexy time with it. But since there isn't anything all it's doing is taking up space in the room. I find it funny that you can't go out onto your balcony at night.

I'll just ignore Michelle then and just go after Charlotte for the most part. Ella is a lesbian but gives herself to a guy that does't sound like a lesbian to me. I altered that spot some and changed it in the notebook as well.

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/friendship_ella.rpy", line 36, in script call
call Ella_7 from _call_Ella_7
File "game/friendship_ella.rpy", line 547, in script
3 "Hmm. I somehow figured they'd be brown. I don't know why."
Exception: Sayer 3 is not a function or string.
 

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Ah... the old '3 is not an E' mix up. That's only the second reported bug for the game, so I still think it's doing pretty good.

And you're not the first to comment on not liking Ella's first time with Evan. There isn't much I can do about it now though. Perhaps I'll change it in the future. Or maybe someone will eventually create a mod to change it. I've ensured that the files are very easy to edit, so it wouldn't surprise me if someone with Ren'py knowledge created a mod for that sort of thing.
 

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The previous post about it got kind of buried here, so I'll post about it agian. I now have a non-Patron exclusive Discord server that anyone can join. If you want to join, here is the link:
 

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A fellow fan of Persona, I see :)

Well written, and a nice amount of content for a 0.1 release.
 

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I was already deleting Evan out of her life so that part is a figment of her imagination when I posted about it since almost everyone is going to save their virginity for the one that they love and will not just give it to someone they don't love and don't want anything to do with it and if Evan was a real man he would of been able to of seen that she didn't care for them but he proved that he really only cared about himself and not her and I changed her first time to crystal pistol and turned her back into a virgin .
 

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A fellow fan of Persona, I see :)

Well written, and a nice amount of content for a 0.1 release.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. But are you talking about the way the gameplay works in this game (which currently is basically a copy of Persona's social life gameplay), or did you notice the Persona music add-on?

I also see you're a fellow game maker. Is Making Movies your game? You use Honey Select, right? I suppose I it's easier to use as Daz Studio (which is what I use for the art), but I don't really like how skin textures and light look in Honey Select. Daz Studio does take much, much more time per images though. So both have pros and cons I suppose.
 

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I was already deleting Evan out of her life so that part is a figment of her imagination when I posted about it since almost everyone is going to save their virginity for the one that they love and will not just give it to someone they don't love and don't want anything to do with it and if Evan was a real man he would of been able to of seen that she didn't care for them but he proved that he really only cared about himself and not her and I changed her first time to crystal pistol and turned her back into a virgin .
That's a cool idea. Why not share the changes as a mod with the rest of the community? I welcome modding of all sorts. I don't even mind if someone wants to make money off the mods (as long as you don't re-upload the game itself as your own and don't remove the links to my Patreon page of course).
 

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I noticed both the music and the social life stuff, yeah :) Making Movies does something similar with the stat upgrades, though it doesn't use the social links the way you do.

Honey Select was an interesting choice at the time. I'm not an artist, so it provided a simple way to generate characters for the game. I actually like the visual feel of them, and the process is a lot easier and faster than Daz, but on the other hand it's a lot more limiting in terms of content, and in terms of IP ownership.
 
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