RPGM Headpats & Handholding [v0.17] [Insomnimaniac Games]

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I wrote another short story featuring characters from the game:
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While the two I posted previously were more like scenes from the game this one is more like a typical story. I actually enjoyed writing the non-sexual part more than the sex scene.
 
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How much handholding is in this game? and why isn't handholding and headpats a genre tag?
 
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Good chapter! Iris is precious. Looking forward to next one!

A few typos:
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"thats" should be "that's"

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Feelings" should be "Feeling's"

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"Your" should be" You're"

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"hold" should be "holed"

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I don't think that I should be there.

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Either that should be periods instead of commas, or the second and third word should not start with capital M.

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"feat" should be "feet". Also, "ballon" should be "balloon" and I don't think Hot needs to be capitalized. And maybe "super heated" should be one word.

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This one's not a typo but a bug. You can't leave the map from here, you are forced to teleport. And if you come back you still can't leave and have to teleport. I am going to guess this is a case of wrong event priority.
 
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moonblackhen said:
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I don't think that I should be there.
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Actually, that's about Apples new voice confirmation device, the IYup. The only thing it does is say yup to stuff. Only $999 at your local Apple store.
moonblackhen said:
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This one's not a typo but a bug. You can't leave the map from here, you are forced to teleport. And if you come back you still can't leave and have to teleport. I am going to guess this is a case of wrong event priority.
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Fixed. It was a remnant of the old map I copied over.
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Oh, yeah, forgot to ask:
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Is Iris supposed to be saying "pol-y-roon" instead of "pol-t-roon"?
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It's both her not being able to pronounce it, and a play on the word poly, as in polyamorous. Not my best joke, I admit. :ROFLMAO:

Thank you, as always!
 
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