VN Ren'Py Harem Hotel [v0.17.2] [Runey]

[Runey]

We only got to friendship 10 first because the PC isn't a monster--and it only takes a couple of weeks anyway..., but the kind of person who buys another person as a slave? By definition they are monsters. It's kind of hard to believe that not one of those guys raped their brand new smoking hot submissive slave in the past hundreds of years.

Also, she will willingly strip naked for you after a couple of days. This was not a case where we need to seduce/corrupt her very hard. She takes to bondage like a fish to water. Some of this can be chalked up to porn game logic but it really does seem impossible that she still had her cherry after all these years given her stated backstory.

Fair enough, I just thought taking her virginity would be a good part of her story. It's easy to assume her previous masters made her do plenty of things, like take off her clothes.

But in the end, the only reason she's still a virgin is because I wanted her to be a virgin. And I think it fits her personality well.

 

[Burningman]

Change her background a little, made her previous masters be only women and the last his grandfather just wanted a 'maid' and she is just a couple of months in there(since we know his grandfather was the one who built what is behind the mysterious door, and probably would rape/fuck her later) so she was just too clumsy to do much so she was just a cleaner and because of it she was submissive since she was always told what to do and she is just too 'bad' compared to others maid(since there are slaves we suppose there are men there that would buy women to his woman so she can take care of things) problem fixed, and even her lack of skill(since she gained a little of skill in just a couple of weeks with you there) can be said to be because what she does is worse of what others do and because of it she was given the menial task 'cleaning' and since she is slow to learn she was not given the chance to learn after all to teach her they would need to spent way too much time since she is slow to learn so is better to teach another slave etc...

anyway, it is just a suggestion if you use it or not is up to you.

 

[katmandomo]

At least Ashley's virginity made sense. I originally raised an eyebrow that she would still be a virgin while being both super cute and also ravenously hungry for dick; but then you consider how she was still living with her parents and still being fairly young and most importantly her social circle knew she was a total psycho and would make anyone's life a living hell if they stuck their penis in her. Our MC is so eager to bang anything with two legs and two boobs that he completely missed the warning signs and now he's got a huge problem on his hands.

Still, she's in college, and I know she complains about her old boyfriends but I think that's mostly a cover for the fact that she sets off tons of red flags and they all manage to escape.

 

[Runey]

Change her background a little, made her previous masters be only women and the last his grandfather just wanted a 'maid' and she is just a couple of months in there(since we know his grandfather was the one who built what is behind the mysterious door, and probably would rape/fuck her later) so she was just too clumsy to do much so she was just a cleaner and because of it she was submissive since she was always told what to do and she is just too 'bad' compared to others maid(since there are slaves we suppose there are men there that would buy women to his woman so she can take care of things) problem fixed, and even her lack of skill(since she gained a little of skill in just a couple of weeks with you there) can be said to be because what she does is worse of what others do and because of it she was given the menial task 'cleaning' and since she is slow to learn she was not given the chance to learn after all to teach her they would need to spent way too much time since she is slow to learn so is better to teach another slave etc...

anyway, it is just a suggestion if you use it or not is up to you.

Slavery in this world has sort of been normalized, at least for Elves, because they're seen as lesser. But raping a slave is a no go. It's not traditional slavery I guess, it's more like unpaid work, and if you don't work, you get kicked out on the streets, captured, and sold again.

 

[katmandomo]

It's probably better if you don't think about it too hard.

The closest analog is probably the House Elves from Harry Potter. Although they avoided rape only because they were in children's books.

 

[Runey]

It's probably better if you don't think about it too hard.

The closest analog is probably the House Elves from Harry Potter. Although they avoided rape only because they were in children's books.

I have a sneaking suspicion it's because they were hideous.

 

[katmandomo]

People fuck goats. They would absolutely abuse house elves. They would have their own section on Pornhub and everything.

 

[WingedGhost]

I think this game is GREAT.. please developer, don't listen to people that say Lin can't be virgin. I like the story a lot, I told my friend to play this game.. he is very picky.. but This game was so GREAT for him, we can't wait for new version.. all thumbs up

 

[DocPorny]

People fuck goats. They would absolutely abuse house elves. They would have their own section on Pornhub and everything.

Iiiiiuuuhh .... You are absolutly and 100% correct but still ... iiiiuuuh :confounded:

 

[katmandomo]

Thinking about this some more, Lin's backstory could work with only some minor tweaks.

The first thing would be that she's only been owned by one or two families in the past, and both are traditionalist. She was originally bought during a short time when having an elf was fashionable for the landed gentry. After a little bit of time being shown off at parties and the like the attitude towards them changed and she was just dumped into the cleaning staff and mostly forgotten. The owners were the kind of people who didn't see the help, and the rest of the staff resented her so she wasn't abused but was ignored and lonely for hundreds of years. Maybe there was a touch of elf racism involved too. Finally someone on the house was looking over the books and discovered that one of the help was actually an elf so they discreetly disposed of her cheap to your grandfather.

Of course having meals prepared for her for all that time means she has forgotten how to cook and never learned modern appliances. Also, she falls for you incredibly fast because you actually acknowledge her and provide company. She's overwhelmed at your basic attention and would do almost anything to keep it, even if you are kind of a dick and telling her to strip for you the day after you meet.

 

[xןʞ]

...It's his game, bro.

 

[katmandomo]

Doesn't mean it can't make sense.

I've put a lot more thought into this one than most every other game on this site. It's incredibly awesome to have a game where the storyline isn't just "I want to bang my sister and mom because I never leave the house."

 

[DocPorny]

I agree. I really really like the game. I mean, this one and "Perverted Hotel" kinda awoken my thing for crazy chicks^^. But I'm also one of those people you would never want to watch a movie with because I think to much about it. I DO enjoy the ride, or in this case the game, but what's wrong with thinking about how it would "work" better? It might even give the creator some inspiration who knows? And even if not, it's fun to think about ... well ... at least up to the point where someone suddenly puts images of "HP House Elve Porn" in your head ... that's where it becomes dangerous. You know who I mean ... he who I will not name .... (get it? aah I'm cracking myself up here )

 

[Lykanz]

...It's his game, bro.

This.

 

[Runey]

Doesn't mean it can't make sense.

I've put a lot more thought into this one than most every other game on this site. It's incredibly awesome to have a game where the storyline isn't just "I want to bang my sister and mom because I never leave the house."

I agree. I really really like the game. I mean, this one and "Perverted Hotel" kinda awoken my thing for crazy chicks^^. But I'm also one of those people you would never want to watch a movie with because I think to much about it. I DO enjoy the ride, or in this case the game, but what's wrong with thinking about how it would "work" better? It might even give the creator some inspiration who knows? And even if not, it's fun to think about ... well ... at least up to the point where someone suddenly puts images of "HP House Elve Porn" in your head ... that's where it becomes dangerous. You know who I mean ... he who I will not name .... (get it? aah I'm cracking myself up here )

I like the ideas, I can never get enough of that. I probably wont change her backstory too much, maybe a little bit of tweaking. But I am all for new elf lore (instead of changing the lore). I'm still thinking of events that will happen on Wednesdays for her relating to being an elf.

Since Wednesdays are holidays for elves, it would be a good chance to add some lore.

 

[Fzoner95]

Nice game, I enjoyed that very much.

And I love this reaction to "Something lewd".

 

[BumPuncher]

Now I don't know how yandere is typically handled, but it was a little jarring for her to go immediately from friendly and flirty to im gonna murder you. I wish there was a small buildup to that point like first shes disappointed, then upset, then murderous or something. Just a minor transition really.

That said, "on the patreon I found the following plans:

• Milf
• Robot
• Feet/Footjobs
• Pregnancy

Assuming the next update is a quality one I may actually end up supporting this one... Looking forward to future releases either way.

 

[Runey]

Now I don't know how yandere is typically handled, but it was a little jarring for her to go immediately from friendly and flirty to im gonna murder you. I wish there was a small buildup to that point like first shes disappointed, then upset, then murderous or something. Just a minor transition really.

That said, "on the patreon I found the following plans:

• Milf
• Robot
• Feet/Footjobs
• Pregnancy

Assuming the next update is a quality one I may actually end up supporting this one... Looking forward to future releases either way.

I think you're right about the buildup part. I'll be looking through all the old content, and seeing if it needs adjustment.

There's going to be a couple, most likely two, footjobs scenes in v0.2, one with Lin, and one with Ashley. There'll also be content with Ellen, and the Robot Maid will be coming out in v0.2 as well, she already has 6 scenes so far. Join the discord if you'd like to see previews of upcoming content, and take a look at the pins.

I'm also almost done remastering every sex scene to remove the shadow man, and add a better looking penis. I only need to do Lin's scenes until they've all been redone. (And we're only 6 days in to v0.1!)

 

[QcBern]

First off, I'd like to congratulate you, Runey, for being without a doubt the most accessible game developer, already !

I've never seen one, up to date, that was so mindful and attentive to player's thoughts and comments as that you have shown on this forum up 'till now; how very nice of you !

I liked your game, but I believe that you should take your time with character development and story progression. If you look around and consider, a good many of the most successful and popular games out there are the ones where intercourse is delayed, in favor of character depth and the gradual telling of a good story.

A lot has been said about Lin, and I must add my voice along with those that have been absolutely ''enchanted'' (pun intended !) with her character, and would wish that no harm should befall her.

Many are thinking, as I am, that to have her suffer BDSM-like treatment does not suit this so lovely and endearing of-a-character's persona, such as you yourself had established her to be as her foundation as depicted at the beginning of the story.

We would be expecting a different fate for such a charming character.

Since you are already acquainted with Jikei and Nocht's work, one type of character who would be better suited, as an example, for BDSM would be Velle; now there's an instance where the persona matches the type !

Not pretty, sweet, little old (!) Lin...

But I like your initiative, Runey !

QcBern

P.S. Perhaps a more probable backdrop for our dear Elf friend would be that, since there aren't hordes of them out on the streets, the few of them that there are have had, for the most part, to have lived a life of recluse. Being marginal themselves, they probably would have felt better accepted hanging around with the likes of the Gypsies and the Roms.

Elvs stem from Celtic mythology, do they not ? Perhaps, with the advent of modernity, they left Ireland to join these groups.

It was really cute to see Lin offer a flower to the MC; if she were to be shown demonstrating further such cultural gestures, it would add to her depth as a character.

I would suggest to research or dwell on this further, Runey.

Please, take your time to create a great game !

 

[katmandomo]

Wednesday activity possibilities:

Meditation, possibly in the nude in yoga poses to center the spirit
Anointing the body with special oils, possibly applied by a close friend
Honing the body in the holy carnal arts (masturbating)
Practicing the elven fertility dances traditionally danced at the solstace festivals.