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[VN] [Others] [Abandoned] Fashion Business: Monica’s Adventures [v1.004] [DecentMonkey]

Discussion in 'Games' started by crust, Apr 14, 2018.

[VN] [Others] [Abandoned] Fashion Business: Monica’s Adventures [v1.004] [DecentMonkey] 3 5 17votes
3/5, 17 votes

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  1. pixelsniper

    pixelsniper Member

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    This game can be really good but is soooooooooooo slow. Anyway i love the pictures and she is so hot
     
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  2. Whitenicky

    Whitenicky Nicky Donor

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    Did anyone finish the episode 1?
    If yes what i need to do or go to to pass the time, becouse i need come back later about Di*k Office(The Laywer)
     
  3. Penfold Mole

    Penfold Mole Well-Known Member

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    I'm quite not sure what you are trying to say here. But in case you are trying to say that I'm the one identifying with her, then you are dead wrong.
    1. I could never identify myself with a female character to begin with;
    2. To identify with a character I have to have something in common with the guy that I like about myself besides having a dick. Emotionally and physically. The character has to be someone I can identify with. I could never identify myself with an obnoxious character I don't like. For example, I just can't identify with obnoxious little 10-year old looking dwarfs. I can not imagine myself being one. I was taller than my mom when I was 12 and a year later taller than dad;
    3. If I can not identify with the MC (which means that there are very few games here where I can even begin to do that), then I play the game as a "puppet master". The guy who pulls the strings when possible, making the MC do things that I choose for him/her, throw him/her into situations I want him/her to get into. Sometimes I throw them into bad situations intentionally, especially when I don't like them.
    There are at least three different "modes" for the player to play a role playing game, not just the one you are referring to and most likely seem to use yourself. Always trying to identify with the character is a very bad "mode" in most cases. Just don't blame the game or the dev if you are unable to play games in some other, more reasonable "mode" that wouldn't irritate you so much.

    I don't know if you did understand me, because you seem to use auto-translators. Unfortunately there are none that work well enough to be sure that your thoughts are converted into something even close to the original meaning of the original text.
     
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  4. Denizen

    Denizen Member

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    just come in the building, talk with scretary, go outside, go inside again, talk with secretary, repeat. Took around 1 hour to figure it out.
     
  5. marcusvm

    marcusvm New Member

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    Talk with the girls near where Fred stopped the car, and then go to the store.
     
  6. Carrera

    Carrera Member

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    Terrible game, it's basically a waiting simulator. It takes over 3 hours before anything happens other than watching your car or NPCs to move across the screen. That is quite literally all you do for the first 3 hours. You spend 30 seconds talking to an NPC, then wait on them to catch up to you, or watch your car move.

    After 3 hours something finally happens (not gonna spoil it, but it's not sexy stuff) Then you spend another hour waiting and trying to be nice to another NPC, after an hour of this crap, basically begging then sleeping for 13 days the MC gets stripped (first tiny bit of sexy stuff) and threatened with rape, but you still don't get to see or do anything.

    My times may be off a tiny bit, I did get up and go to the kitchen for some Tea and nuked myself a couple of hotdogs,,,,, that was more entertaining than this crap.
     
  7. fenixblack

    fenixblack Active Member

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    @DecentMonkey I'm stuck at the first clothing store visit. I tried to click on literally every object in the store several times from all directions, but it doesn't work. Dick and the driver outside tell me that we can go on if I'm finished in the store. Could you provide a hotfix for that?
     
  8. DecentMonkey

    DecentMonkey Active Member Game Developer

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    Can you please send me a save file?
    It in C:/Users/%yourusername%/AppData/Roaming/FashionBusiness/saves

    Also want to say that I'm working on a fix for waiting in cutscenes and car driving.
    It all can be accelerated or skipped.

    As I understand it, this is the main theme for criticizing the game.

    I think i can provide update until tomorrow.

    Also...
    It's not RPG Maker game. It running on my own engine based on popular platform "Game Maker Studio 2".
    I created the game alone.
    I did not have players who could tell me about problem moments in gameplay.

    In order to get a feedback, I posted the game on the local forum.
    I planned to get feedback and adjust the game according to community wishes.

    It was a big surprise for me that the game so quickly spread on the web.

    And I was disappointed that the version you are now playing is not refined.

    I will work on it and i hope to turn it into the one of the most awesome games!

    Wait for updates!

    Thank you!
     
  9. macadam

    macadam Well-Known Member Game Developer

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    honestly, with the renders quality and the amount of them, i must say you have something in your hands that can kick the ass of alots of others game here.
    you just need to know how to use that corretly, and that why peoples here are for ( i htink :p )
    once you got the good pace for your game.
    it can easily doing 2 pussy with 1 dick ( 2 birsd , 1 rock.. got it ? ^^ )

    also, if i may can add, dont rush in the story. as you make alots of render, its better to elaborate the story, but still dont make the story too long on non important part.

    with a better pace and story , like i explain, this game can be very good
     
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  10. Whitenicky

    Whitenicky Nicky Donor

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    Yeah i agree most of those comments are true, overall is decent and nice game, great quality of the renders. Lets see where Monica will lead her path becouse she went to her formal house :D
     
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  11. fenixblack

    fenixblack Active Member

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    Great to see your effort to improve this game, because I honestly see some potential in there. Sure the waiting is frustrating and the intro is a bit stretched but it's good to see you're working on it. I've also attached the savegame
     

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  12. 1989 C.L

    1989 C.L Member

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    I think if you looks at the images in the folder you can pretty much sum up what happens to her. The images seemed chronological - I couldn't finish it cause I'm stuck at the part where you have to go buy a dress with D1ck, some bug or something.
     
  13. Net001

    Net001 Member

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    Better of watching porn then playing this dull game, it's one the slowest paced I ever played and played plenty of jRPG games.
     
  14. DecentMonkey

    DecentMonkey Active Member Game Developer

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    As far as I can see, in this file the scripts are already corrupted.
    Do you have the previous save game from which you can repeat this bug?
     
  15. fenixblack

    fenixblack Active Member

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    Sorry thats the only save I got. Btw I'd still be very glad if someone could share one of their savegames so I can continue playing
     
  16. torkenstiem

    torkenstiem Well-Known Member

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    I like the fact that MC is a real bitch, it makes me think somewhere down the line, she will get a taste of her own medicine (bad karma). Upskirt shots with the driver as she gets out of the car or a peeping tom at her house, ANYTHING to atleast make this slow paced game a bit more interesting, as the story progresses.
     
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  17. Dole

    Dole Well-Known Member

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    Fashion Business 1.002 Bugfix April 16

    WIN

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    MAC

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  18. DecentMonkey

    DecentMonkey Active Member Game Developer

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    Here, keep the save.
    Rename it to save0.sav
     

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  19. Whitenicky

    Whitenicky Nicky Donor

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    So @DecentMonkey when we can hope about new update? Any plans?
     
  20. fenixblack

    fenixblack Active Member

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    Thanks, works fine now
     
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