HTML - Disruption [v0.16 Public] [gaaby]

Great topic, failing on the execution. Should drop the whole male-Dom story-line altogether, or at least wait until the sissy route is complete.

Issues: I know this is an adult sex game but I have an issue using the ret* word. It is very disrespectful and very lazy for the Dev to use it. be creative.

Way too much grinding. Also, due to the excessive grinding, there are events that one can spawn prior to the storyline triggering it.

The Tips section is obtuse.

Why the hell is the MC wearing clunky brown male lace up dress shoes with a dress? If the MC is going outside wearing a cute dress, then the MC must have at least some cute flats working up to heels. (bingo instant content with Mom seeing the MC without cute shoes, takes the MC to the mall to get some flats and heels, then can teach the MC several times how to wear heels)

Need to have a link to "go to therapy" directly from the MC bedroom. There is a "go to class" and "go to work" link there, why do we need to click click click click to get to the therapist?" Also if the therapist scene is a repeat, indicate somehow that it is currently EOC or don't require it..

There should be a quick link to go to the MC's sister's room directly from the PC if they are locked and need a release. If it is night time, there is no option to talk to her as she is asleep (even if the MC goes into the hall and sees the sister entertaining guests.

I'd highly suggest to the Dev that they have a better idea as where the paths are going and what can trigger the events. As it looks now, it seems that the Dev is patching ideas along an undeveloped story line. That can only lead to story breaks or abandonment of the whole adventure due to writing themselves into a dead end. (or causing the players to restart several times due to missed and unavailable new content)

Wow! I was seriously hoping for something really good based off the ratings but sadly this was not it. Why? While it may look like you have real choices you are way more limited than you think. You are very restricted when it comes to clothing choices both in the home and especially out. There are very limited options for commando under your outfit and it never allowed me to do it out of the home or without a shirt as well in the home.

You have as far as I saw extremely few options of what you can actually do and read carefully as this game likes to maneuver you towards feminine options and gay activities if you don't pay attention. You can quickly max out your domination points with certain activities but the points are limited with each type of activity. Oh and it is always the same scene every time and even the same garments involved. Lack of variety is very boring. School is the same scenes. Your either a wuss or a rude ass but nothing ever changes, Laptop is for porn ONLY. Good games have ways to earn income and build skills. Skills, guess you really don't need em. Income, for what ? Money is apparently shown but I found no use for it.

Lots of grind but very little reward in my opinion. I don't mind a bit of grind as long as there is something to show for it.

Hey if the Dev took their time and added some substance and variety to the scenes then this could easily be that 4 game the ratings showed.

A lot of fantastic things in the game and I love where its going, a lot of games with this focus end up abandoned and I hope this isn't one of them so please keep up the good work! I'm sure this game will be fantastic once its completed

V0.2

The game uses stolen porn, but it's mostly consistent with the pictures, so the characters can be recognized and they don't change that much from one picture to the next.

The gameplay is the standard: click buttons to repeat the same events and grind some stat, which in turn will unlock new events to grind.

The only relevant stats seem to be submission and domination. Submission is used as a synonym to feminization in this game: using lipstick or wearing a bra make you submissive. Just the same, domination seems to be overlapped with rapey actions.

I think it'd be a great improvement to rework those elements: dom/sub is all about power dynamics, and there aren't any involved in masturbating to a sleeping girl or to a pair of used underwear.

I'm giving it an extra star because unlike many similar games, it alerts you when there are new events and when you've reached the current end of a path, so you don't waste time clicking everywhere trying to get new content that doesn't exist.

As usual, the review will updated if needed.