VN Ren'Py Abandoned Chasing Crowns [Ch. 3] [Project Post Script]

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groove888

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That said, the MC is an idiot, which is way too common in games on this site. I was really liking the weirdness of Lynn at the end... but the added portion with Aurora makes for 4 different things that aren't explained at all, which I think it one too many (the 4 being the scenes with the doctor, the 'dreams', wtf happened to Lynn, and who the fuck is Aurora).Especially if the dream sections are going to act like the MC is stupid for not figuring out the obvious, which isn't being made obvious to the player at all. I just want to tell that mystery girl to open her mouth and explain or shut the fuck up.
Especially problematic when player had actually no chance to gather clue... I feel this problem is exacerbated by the lack of choice in the gameplay...
 

DragonFire

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Looks interesting, but with no fap value for chapter 1-2? Think I'll wait a bit b4 trying this one out, like a couple more chapters/versions ;)
 
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Rythan25

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Just started the game because I was curious. No idea if it will be a good or a bad game, but finally something original. No NTR, no BBC worship. The idea of the reality show is good and after the intro you already know that something else is going to happen. Kudos at the dev.
 

Shenaniganzz

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So, I'm not usually a fan of amusement ride "games" where you sit back and read the story unfold. This is the first time I actually enjoyed the story!! I'm definitely hooked!
 

triniarin

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Nice concept and nice graphics too (after beating current build removed words about dialogue options)
 

dacris69

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Nice game so far, a combo of survivor-big brother. Like many said before, choices would be great. I like the chars so far, would have been nice to see who gets kicked out in this update.
 

HunterSeeker

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Awesome concept here. Even though I don't really mind kinetic novels, the whole story and situation you've created seems like a fantastic place to put choices about who to form relationships with and such. Perhaps the biggest flaw of your game is that the MC is a stereotypical dolt. Keep up the good work though.
 

kokusho

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I am really enjoying the story so far, I think that part of it is very well done. There is one thing that is going to bother me about this game though. It looks like the way to win in this contest is like Survivor/Big Brother where you vote people out of the game. But as a fan of harem games.....I don't want to vote any of these chicks out of the game, I want to bang them all! Hopefully there is a twist and the girls don't get voted out, or even better they have to lose clothes when they lose trials or some other punishment, but don't make them leave! What is the end of the game going to be like? The MC whacking off by himself?
 
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deadacct

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A big thanks to everyone who downloaded and tried out the game so far! Based on feedback provided here and elsewhere, I've made a regarding the most common concern - player choice. I hope it helps clarify our plan going forwards.

Keep the feedback coming!
 
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Siphon

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Couldn't the MC just take the remote around in his pocket and try to secretly scan other bracelets with it?

Aside from that and what other people pointed out, really enjoying this so far, despite the lack of adult content. Eager to see more.
 
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FemdomVR

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Really enjoyed playing that! I found the story to be absolutely compelling - I was genuinely gutted when I came to the end! The characters are all interesting with well crafted personalities, and visually well designed - I definitely have a thing for a few of the girls in there (I just wish HS had slightly better designed footwear around the heels). The storyline itself has me absolutely hooked - I love the reality show with dark undertones angle which is keeping me guessing as to what is really going on! I'm not overly concerned about the lack of choices so far, largely because you have done such a good job of setting the scene and establishing the characters - hopefully we'll start seeing more options and choices as to how we'll 'play' the game moving forward. A systems which allows alliances to made/broken and and a number of paths the story can go down would be fantastic!
 

helixfossil

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I like this game so far, the lack of any real h-scene is a bit underwhelming, but I'll stick around to see where the next update goes.
 

whosthatguy

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Anyone want to float theories as to who gets eliminated first? Here are a few:

The "obvious" answer: Valerie. The only character you haven't spoken to yet. Amber and Kora get enough people on your side, and rather than immediately striking out at the antagonist Sabina (where's the fun in that?) they go for her main ally and weaken her power base.

The "Joe Schmo" answer: Yuna. Oh, you're "playing the game" and employing a strategy? Strategize your way out of this!

The "classic reality show" answer: Neyra. A lot of times, trying to fly under the radar, not saying much, being passive, means you get eliminated first. Probably because the producers ask leading questions to the contestants about kicking out the person who isn't interesting television.

The "this is a porn game" answer: Kora. Don't forget that Sabina floated a rumour that you had sex with Kora. After you save Lynn, people might not want to eliminate you, but rather punish your sexual partner. Of course, this also ensures that maybe now they can have sex with you! Because porn game!

Of course, this all assumes that the twist in the story doesn't come before the first elimination!
 
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tomcire

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Very good storytelling and nice characters, it got me, even if it is completely linear. It's sad that we'll have to wait a lot before arrive to the core of the action.

Of course, this all assumes that the twist in the story doesn't come before the first elimination!
I bet instead that the first to be kicked out will be Lynn. She knows.
What? I don't know, but she does, and for the sake of the mistery she will disappear one moment before she give us some important informations.
She seems "brainwashed", or maybe she was just acting and she may have forgotten her fictional character. Whatever the reason is for her bizzare attitude will scare the other girls that will vote her.

Sabina is, right now at least, a not real threat. She has just Valerie from her side, most of the girl are instead interested in MC or are still considering to use him as a pawn, I bet we will get just 2 votes (maybe not even them).

Still there is Maple with the crown, who knows how she will spin the results, she is impulsive and vedicative, maybe she will be the decisive voter who will kick Lynn.
 
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