VN Ren'Py Abandoned American MILF [v0.01] [Vaultman]

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Yeah i dont get it, i plaed it a while ago and it was boring as hell. Just a bunch of cgs tied together by minimal dialogue. Rather give this a try
Rinse, insert different cgs, repeat. That is this one so far... surprised the dialog from camp Pinewwod is not copied.... hope it gets better...
 
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Setosu

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Ugh..He really needs someone to handle the writing. So many spelling and grammatical errors. Then little things that bug me like going from "Mom" to "Mummy". And at times the story makes no sense. Like the MC in the beginning when he is mowing the lawn, "Now the only girlfriend I have is Sam. And she is trying to drag me away somewhere." Then just 3 lines later, " Sometimes, I miss her. But she has a boyfriend." So..The MC is sharing his girlfriend or what? This game does seem like it will be more story driven than Camp Pinewood so having better writing would be nice. If he does that then I'll have high hopes for the game..despite his rather infamous lack of communication and missed release dates.
 
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Morah SDG

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Ugh..He really needs someone to handle the writing. So many spelling and grammatical errors. Then little things that bug me like going from "Mom" to "Mummy". And at times the story makes no sense. Like the MC in the beginning when he is mowing the lawn, "Now the only girlfriend I have is Sam. And she is trying to drag me away somewhere." Then just 3 lines later, " Sometimes, I miss her. But she has a boyfriend." So..The MC is sharing his girlfriend or what? This game does seem like it will be more story driven than Camp Pinewood so having better writing would be nice. If he does that then I'll have high hopes for the game..despite his rather infamous lack of communication and missed release dates.
I really do blame a lack of english familiarity as well as a good sense of "Okay, let's do a good job of detailing EXACTLY what the plot is." Some Devs just mash ideas together and don't frame them the best.
 
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Morah SDG

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I know this isn't the thread for Camp P either, but I just wanna say this about games that use previously existing IP. Another thing that bothers me is when people don't make the characters act or behave in the LEAST like the character. Like if you're a fan of that character, I'd have hoped you'd have watched it. That should be your pre-requisite for actual interactable characters you want to bring into your game. I know it's just a porn game, but standards are still important to maintain. This game hopefully does a better job than CP did at actually creating the mood and vibes of the characters VM was including.
 
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jaytee01

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I like so far might be quite good with some more content. When are the version release dates?
 

jaytee01

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The game has a cool art style but has no sex scenes, is very short, has little variety of images and has an error near the end (which fortunately can be ignored) when selecting "Let's have a chat" talking to Francine.
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/prt2.rpy", line 138, in script
    $ _lastlabel = prt2desf1
  File "game/prt2.rpy", line 138, in <module>
    $ _lastlabel = prt2desf1
NameError: name 'prt2desf1' is not defined
Me too.
 

MegamanMegas

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You could also in the other milfs from Seth MacFarlane's cartoons including a cartoon version of characters from the Orville.
 

Morah SDG

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You could also in the other milfs from Seth MacFarlane's cartoons including a cartoon version of characters from the Orville.
I think my mother watches that show. She likes it enough. I'd be unfamiliar with any of the characters myself.
 

campfap

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Wait, thats the other game he is working on for the last 6 Months ? The one he delayed 4 or 5 times so the quality is good and the game bug free ? L O L
Sorry but this game is a mess in my opinion. The dialogues are confusing, its really short (5 min) and has unexpected error when clicking on one of the very few dialouge options.
 

Morah SDG

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Wait, thats the other game he is working on for the last 6 Months ? The one he delayed 4 or 5 times so the quality is good and the game bug free ? L O L
Sorry but this game is a mess in my opinion. The dialogues are confusing, its really short (5 min) and has unexpected error when clicking on one of the very few dialouge options.
Like, if he had just announced this in May, and this was released a month out after he should have just made a finalized Camp Pinewood, I'd be like "Good, this is nice, he's changing things around so that he's at least happy with what he's making. "But this is the work he put in after all this time? Good gravy. Hire somebody on to help you, Vman.
 
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