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I didn't see any writing issues, I think a few people connected you to another dev ( I think without reason ) and now everyone is trying to trash you for no reason.
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Oh for FCK SAKE!
The couple have been MARRIED FOR A FCKING DECADE!
...Who is THIS guy with the camera?
Oh he is my BROTHERS SON (NOT my Nephew though??), they died in a car accident.
SHE never heard of this, its all a revelation to her, the DEATH OF HIS BROTHER SLIPPED his mind?
LOOK Dev, write out the FULL script to this Kinetic novel, read it fully and slowly so you can finalize it, THEN put it to digital here.
Its VERY clear you are only writing as you fcking go, and THAT will bring you to boredom VERY soon, which will have you ABANDONING this project.
Oh and why is this loser alcoholic husband naked in the kitchen while the wife ISNT??
The couple have been MARRIED FOR A FCKING DECADE!
...Who is THIS guy with the camera?
Oh he is my BROTHERS SON (NOT my Nephew though??), they died in a car accident.
SHE never heard of this, its all a revelation to her, the DEATH OF HIS BROTHER SLIPPED his mind?
LOOK Dev, write out the FULL script to this Kinetic novel, read it fully and slowly so you can finalize it, THEN put it to digital here.
Its VERY clear you are only writing as you fcking go, and THAT will bring you to boredom VERY soon, which will have you ABANDONING this project.
Oh and why is this loser alcoholic husband naked in the kitchen while the wife ISNT??
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to release such a short demo is a mockery and a crime!
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What kind of rating can you give or discuss anything after seeing 10 pictures? 
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He's not mine at all, he's just my brother's son lol
Who wrote this script? Was it a 10 year old child? lol
Who wrote this script? Was it a 10 year old child? lol
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Why ruin the game
?90% of the users here wants winchest
Skip Patreon and use Subscribestar instead.
make the game as it was intended to be
Shota + milf + No incest = Big W.
The whole thing where the "landlady" and the MC look eerily similar for mysterious (or, obvious) reasons was getting pretty old.
There are some of us who don't like incest... And people who do, can patch the game later.
Good work, Jessie von Raum. Hopefully people support the project, for now all I can offer is positivity.
The whole thing where the "landlady" and the MC look eerily similar for mysterious (or, obvious) reasons was getting pretty old.
There are some of us who don't like incest... And people who do, can patch the game later.
Good work, Jessie von Raum. Hopefully people support the project, for now all I can offer is positivity.
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He has a Subscribestar account under the name 17MOONKEYS https://f95zone.to/threads/the-loving-son-v0-7-17moonkeys.193825/Why ruin the game
90% of the users here wants winchest
Skip Patreon and use Subscribestar instead.
make the game as it was intended to be