dav3knight

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Hmm Zee ... If i can make a suggestion ... i like your concept of redoing one year before the main event ... and personally i like that ... and i know that after the long wait ... most of the people here a little bit disapointed becouse they didnt get what they expect ... but for me ... if your story's concept to combine this version and the 0.9 version in the next update ( i mean continue the 0.9 event ) i think thats will be great ... just my opinion ... :D
 
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played this new version for about 15mins and spent most of that looking for keys. whole thing has taken a very weird turn that makes little sense until you read devs posts here. even then it still makes little sense as to how this improves the project. the story before had edge which has now been blunted.

triggers that require going online to find as well as moving room to room clicking everything in the hopes of further tiny progress being made is a bit odd to say the least. loading previous saves was also fun not being able to see the numbers of page on screen as the font colour blends with the background pic.

im sure there are some positives but having to start all over again is not on my books as progress. playing lots of updates previously never left me thinking 'oh we defo need a pre-history here' and the difference in style is just confused. its gone from a decent story driven VN to whatever spending a ton of time screen clicking is supposed to be.

its just weird :pensive:
 

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Hope the future updates will be interesting. But all locations will be redone, now I have more opportunities to make the locations more beautiful, and more realistic in order to convey the atmosphere of what is happening on the screen to the player. Also the story will be rewrited.
For now I don't have the possibility to make full updates to 4 branches. There will be two main lines with sub-lines.
 

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you going to rewrite the story again.... how many story's do you have lmao
Hope it will be a last rebuild. I would not do a rebuild, but my first locations were made for TK-17, and I did not really bother with graphics. After I replaced the models, and after upgrading my computer, I had the opportunity to make the game better visually.
 

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Hope it will be a last rebuild. I would not do a rebuild, but my first locations were made for TK-17, and I did not really bother with graphics. After I replaced the models, and after upgrading my computer, I had the opportunity to make the game better visually.
kk will wait for your rebuild and try your game again. good luck with it
 

jaydem

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Holy shit!! Thanks Brother, I totally missed those spots....Lol!! Didn't even think about there being hidden spots in this one.
Your awesome!!
As far as this version of the game (being a prequel), so far isn't to the point of explaining anything, that we didn't get in the original yet. On it's own....if I've never had played the original....It's going good with the renders, but the animation of the fuck scene seemed a bit blurry. Maybe that was intended, but over all not bad for me.
I just have a couple of suggestions, that I would like to get out there. In no way am I putting anything your doing so far down, it's just constructive suggestions.

1. If at some point the neighbor Mom is going to be either be a love interest or someone that you'll eventually fuck, in the future. Maybe just leave the fuck scene, out of the game, and have it implied or not happen at all.

Or

2. I would have suggested to not have the best friend in the game, as the scene in the above mentioned really doesn't seem to go well with the scenario...Except...
There is a way to actually make that scene work (sitting in the grass watching) You may not like this, but have the best friend not a guy.
Make your best friend a girl, same rapping style and video gamer, just a tomboy BF.
Then the scene can work out, with the both of them sitting in the grass watching the action.
Maybe trying to do a little light touching of each other….experimenting right before they almost get caught.

I'm looking forward to the next update, Your totally awesome Brother!!
Thank you for the work your doing...………………...Peace!!
 

jaydem

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Holy shit!! Thanks Brother, I totally missed those spots....Lol!! Didn't even think about there being hidden spots in this one.
Your awesome!!
As far as this version of the game (being a prequel), so far isn't to the point of explaining anything, that we didn't get in the original yet. On it's own....if I've never had played the original....It's going good with the renders, but the animation of the fuck scene seemed a bit blurry. Maybe that was intended, but over all not bad for me.
I just have a couple of suggestions, that I would like to get out there. In no way am I putting anything your doing so far down, it's just constructive suggestions.

1. If at some point the neighbor Mom is going to be either be a love interest or someone that you'll eventually fuck, in the future. Maybe just leave the fuck scene, out of the game, and have it implied or not happen at all.

Or

2. I would have suggested to not have the best friend in the game, as the scene in the above mentioned really doesn't seem to go well with the scenario...Except...
There is a way to actually make that scene work (sitting in the grass watching) You may not like this, but have the best friend not a guy.
Make your best friend a girl, same rapping style and video gamer, just a tomboy BF.
Then the scene can work out, with the both of them sitting in the grass watching the action.
Maybe trying to do a little light touching of each other….experimenting right before they almost get caught.

I'm looking forward to the next update, Your totally awesome Brother!!
Thank you for the work your doing...………………...Peace!!
I've been thinking too Brother, if you were to make the BF a tomboy instead. And your going to eventually merge the two together.
Then it would work out perfectly, having the BF a girl.

In the original, your introduced to the family and the thick blonde chick sitting with your sister. Now, what if the blonde chick is actually your BF.
It would then make a different style of play in the original, since she has a boyfriend she texts on the phone.
It wouldn't be a stretch for something to be started for the MC and her. (The bathroom scene), and she wouldn't have to be considered the games slut.
It would then open a possible breakup with her boyfriend, and make you a love interest to her as well, as you both would have a history together.

Sorry, just had to finish out the thought...………………...Peace!!
 

Zee95

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Holy shit!! Thanks Brother, I totally missed those spots....Lol!! Didn't even think about there being hidden spots in this one.
Your awesome!!
As far as this version of the game (being a prequel), so far isn't to the point of explaining anything, that we didn't get in the original yet. On it's own....if I've never had played the original....It's going good with the renders, but the animation of the fuck scene seemed a bit blurry. Maybe that was intended, but over all not bad for me.
I just have a couple of suggestions, that I would like to get out there. In no way am I putting anything your doing so far down, it's just constructive suggestions.

1. If at some point the neighbor Mom is going to be either be a love interest or someone that you'll eventually fuck, in the future. Maybe just leave the fuck scene, out of the game, and have it implied or not happen at all.

Or

2. I would have suggested to not have the best friend in the game, as the scene in the above mentioned really doesn't seem to go well with the scenario...Except...
There is a way to actually make that scene work (sitting in the grass watching) You may not like this, but have the best friend not a guy.
Make your best friend a girl, same rapping style and video gamer, just a tomboy BF.
Then the scene can work out, with the both of them sitting in the grass watching the action.
Maybe trying to do a little light touching of each other….experimenting right before they almost get caught.

I'm looking forward to the next update, Your totally awesome Brother!!
Thank you for the work your doing...………………...Peace!!
If u will open all the secrets, u will see another 3-4 animations. Not blurry.
Thnx a lot for your feedback, for your suggestions.
 
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evildead

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maybe jaydem should try your hand at making a game mate. you got the head for making a story up.
 

jaydem

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maybe jaydem should try your hand at making a game mate. you got the head for making a story up.
Lol!! Thanks Brother, but I'm horrible at computer stuff even to try an attempt.
Actually, my sister considers me a novelist, as I'm still waiting for my first novel to go through a review and get published.
I on the other hand, can't write for shit....Lol!! Just good at making stories.

Now @Zee95 has got an awesome story premise going, and I've probably over stepped my bounds.
I believe he's got something in his own mind for story, I just don't want to make him mad at throwing to many suggestions at him.
For that, I apologize Brother, and ask you to take it as possibly helpful thought to mule around the ole Attic Brother.
Again, thanks so much for all that your doing, and accomplished. Keeping at it, is what will make you great!!…………….Peace!!
 
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