VN Ren'Py Abandoned Unexpected Adventures [Ch. 6 July 2020 Version] [Macadam]

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Compressed version will be up in a few minutes! Adding more links & Mac version shortly.
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thanks :)

i tryed tocompress.. but i m very bad at that. i also tryed to make android version, but renpy give me error when preparing (i have all stuff tho..)

soo, i let someone else doing that, its less risky :p
 

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sometimes iam totally lost where iam in game but i like game alot its like simpsons or some other this day real cartoon on tv but with +18 stuff ,just wondering what is goal in game or just run around ;) ,thank you
 

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I'm still waiting for a translation for Pt Portugal.
I wanted to understand the jokes I also want a cheats:rolleyes:
 

macadam

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It's just too nuts and the humor too heavy-handed. It gets hard to care about the story in any way. Just one guy's opinion.
it's all part of the plan.. lol
the game have a (imho) nice backstory, but honestly, i think it should be too.. standard and boring to just have the story. soo i just put a bit of fun on it. sorry if its too much :(
sometimes iam totally lost where iam in game but i like game alot its like simpsons or some other this day real cartoon on tv but with +18 stuff ,just wondering what is goal in game or just run around ;) ,thank you
i dont understand at all ..lol. i know the simpson and some other cartoons (not alots tho). the goal in the game is clear at one point, but it will become more clear on next update i guess.
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hmm interesting gotta try this : D
please do. its all i ask :) , peoples just try and.. maybe enjoy.
I'm still waiting for a translation for Pt Portugal.
I wanted to understand the jokes I also want a cheats:rolleyes:
Pt Portugal ??
i cant translate it myself for sure, i have no clue on portugese XD . still, i dont know if its possible to convert the joke in portuges with keeping the puns and all ( i know its sadly not possible in french unless i change lots of things) :unsure:
 

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first, i appreciate the fact you tryed my game :) .
and i appreciate that you took time to make such a complex and complete review.

but i see you ask question to yourself, soo, i guess its my job (part of) to answer all of that the best i can.

1- i dont think the others review are based on an opinion about me. i can tell you, alots ( and i really say ALOTS) of peoples around here doesnt like me at all, sometime even hate me, mostly because i m someone who have honest opinion (at least, for me, i m not fear to be honest and i speak what i think).
peoples who make reviews have no idae who i am or how i am. when i read thoses review, they clearly speak about the game.
as for excuse... i dont know.. its their own opinion. i dont blame anybody to say my game is pur garbage and shit. feel free to say it, no problem. as proof, i m glad you give me a review, even low one , i not care as long i have a review that help me. because every opinion help.
honestly, the only review i asked to be removed was an 1 star review created by another dev as a backfire from an comment i made on his game thread. ( wich, obviously wasnt a review at all )
peoples give their opinion, if its excuse, then i dont know. but for me, it sound like they talk about the game.
sure they talk about me and my troubles during this game creation. but well... who doesnt ? i myself mention in some review that its just "the first version" or something else based on a new game or new dev. thoses comments were not made yesteday :)

2- i m not english (that you already know), i m french (if you want to know)... obviously some text part of the game are terrible (mostly the text on renders). but.. wow.. still terrible english ?... i have actually 2 proofreaders, guess they would appreciate to read this XD. that would mean they make terrible work. can't blame them, my english is even worse than everything.
still, thoses peoples do it for free, for pleasure. they are members of this community and i didnt ask them anything, they purpose it themself.
honestly, i cant say if the engish is terrible or not... (obviously as i m not english myself). sooo yeah... if someone around here is a great and professional english native teacher or something, feel free to help me if you want. no, i dont ask for it, i just purpose... peoples are free to make their choice.
its sad to hear that, i try myself to be the best i can in english. and soo , some generous peoples help me to improve the english. and its (apparently) not good at all... well... sorryfor that then. feel free to put my game in the big list of "terrible engrish games" . i wont blame you :)

3- renders quality are shit, i know that. i cant do much better , i try iray on last render ( best quality i can for now ). the scene look rushed with stuff put quickly and randomly or something ? meh...
not to defend myself , but that's not the situation... like , at all.
i can tell you clearly that i carefully build the scene , i try to not put too much stuff on them ( as my pc have limit, i render on CPU too ) , i still try to make them as they should be to explain the best the situation.
it took me 2 fucking hours per render... you can imagine that obviously i put attention on them for not redo them again and again... i dont put assets on the scene, render and that's it. i build the scene based on the script, i put the chars/situation, i modify most of poses and i even create my own, i render for 5 minutes to check globally result (poke or else), then i restart rendering for the complete stuff.
so yeah, some renders have poke, some poses are fucked up, some shit everywhere, grainy as fuck, pur garbage.
but i really try my best in there. with what i have. i m perfectly conscious that the actual "standard" of render reach the absurdly beautyful perfection, like on last games. i cant do that, at all. and i m perfectly aware that i wont be able to do that for long time. soo yeah, my game is not about renders quality. i stated that multiples time.
sorry to dissapoint you, if you like good renders, that game is not for you sadly.

4 - guess you talk about the wtfpedia. reason for that is, itallow to have a background story for chars without having a 500 hours long game that explain that for each chars. its a small resume, nothing else. putting all explanation in the game will make me forced to jump back and forth in time for explain each event that happened. also some peoples doesnt care at all about characters background story. that's why i add it separatly from the story.
as for the font, they are an option in setting that allow players to change at anytime in the game. why i added such a shitty font ? because i m personnaly bored as fuck with the classic ren'py text that feel blank and empty. and i choose this font because its a random funny font. if you dont find it fun, then sorry, that was my choice and it will remain as it. (its my game after all :p )

5 - story character plot and all... its here. but what should i do then ? kicking out all the wtf and humoristic part out of it and share another fucking boring standard porn game ? oh hell no , my game is crazy, story is crazy, shit, or whatever you call it. but it is what it is.... AKA... something different than the shit tons of porn game laying around. that's all i want to make, something different.

6- why playing my game ? .... only reason is : because its different. simple as that. you dont play my game for logic, you dont play it for great story, for great renders, for great porn. you play it for taking a fresh air of something different than the tons of game around here. try to find another game similar to mine around here ! i bet the ones you will find (if you find some) will simply be a "attempt" to use a bit of my own game style. humoristic game, crazy shit, funny stuff and porn all together... you dont find that at every corner here. and sinze i did my game, a few otehrs game suddently started to implent funny and humour on them.. oh! what a coincidence ! i dont blame them. at contrary, its good to see more of this. i mglad that some dev actually realise that its boring as hell to play the same game again and again...

i cant see this into comics honestly... it wont be the same, it will give away a little part of the wtf and interactivity. as for episodes stuff, that would broke too.

yes, this game is a try for me. my first game ever. i try, i like to work on it and i will not stop easily.
you not recommend it, you free. maybe some peoples will read your review and think this game is not for them and dont play. wich is , in my opinion, better than playing it and be dissapointed. you helped alots with your review , thanks alots :)

i m not genuine or nice.. i m a total idiots who just want to share my stupidity with others. let's call that a "mutual sharing" :D
my patreon is a tip jar, i dont ask money, peoples give or not. i consider myself that i cant ask money for such a game.
if i would make some super extra big game with gret stuff in it, i maybe will ask a bit of money for it. but for a first game, a try and constant learning game. its not correct to ask money for it. i will never thanks enougth all the peoples who have give me even a single buck, it was a great move of generosity from them.

thank you for your opinion, it give a clear idea from peoples who doesnt like the game :)
 
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also, i m sorry for the terrible english in this post , i hope you not mad at me :/
Not mad at all, like I said, I just reviewed the game as I saw it. I will admit I didnt play all the way through. It was way too much for me. Perhaps the later sections improve the quality of the game, and I just didnt see that. The text in game was better than the text in the menus and wtfpedia thing, but it is a bit weird that the first thing people see is the menu, and if youre like me, the wtfpedia, and its really hard to read.

Like I said though, I think youre a good person/chicken, you don't make 3.6k posts on a forum and not get noticed. I like your honesty. I like your willingness to try new games by new creators. I like that youre willing to leave comments. And I reckon that people that play your game here and leave reviews have probably seen your comments. Most of them reference your explanations for things in the game. And again, they are valid explanations. But it would be unfair to judge your game based on a different set of standards because of your bad pc, because of your non native english, and because of your design perspective. I thought it was important for someone to leave a counterpoint to the 4 positive reviews that echoed the same points.

Yeah your game is weird, and that grabbed my attention enough to dl it and give it a go. That puts it ahead of a good number of games on this site that were the bland clones that you mentioned. But I think being different for the sake of being different doesnt instantly translate to quality or worthiness of peoples time. Reviews are also subjective, and a game as unusual as yours is going to be polarizing. Given everyone else had recommended it based on its weirdness and explained away the shortcomings even giving 5 star reviews, I thought that it was necessary to give an alternate opinion for those that might not like a game simply because it's different.

I think it's cool that youre making stuff. I haven't so youre way better than me on that front. And the games existence doesnt offend me or anything silly like that. I just didnt like it. If you do decide to work on a more structured project in the future, building off what youve learned with this game I would totally try it out.
 

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Not mad at all, like I said, I just reviewed the game as I saw it. I will admit I didnt play all the way through. It was way too much for me. Perhaps the later sections improve the quality of the game, and I just didnt see that. The text in game was better than the text in the menus and wtfpedia thing, but it is a bit weird that the first thing people see is the menu, and if youre like me, the wtfpedia, and its really hard to read.

Like I said though, I think youre a good person/chicken, you don't make 3.6k posts on a forum and not get noticed. I like your honesty. I like your willingness to try new games by new creators. I like that youre willing to leave comments. And I reckon that people that play your game here and leave reviews have probably seen your comments. Most of them reference your explanations for things in the game. And again, they are valid explanations. But it would be unfair to judge your game based on a different set of standards because of your bad pc, because of your non native english, and because of your design perspective. I thought it was important for someone to leave a counterpoint to the 4 positive reviews that echoed the same points.

Yeah your game is weird, and that grabbed my attention enough to dl it and give it a go. That puts it ahead of a good number of games on this site that were the bland clones that you mentioned. But I think being different for the sake of being different doesnt instantly translate to quality or worthiness of peoples time. Reviews are also subjective, and a game as unusual as yours is going to be polarizing. Given everyone else had recommended it based on its weirdness and explained away the shortcomings even giving 5 star reviews, I thought that it was necessary to give an alternate opinion for those that might not like a game simply because it's different.

I think it's cool that youre making stuff. I haven't so youre way better than me on that front. And the games existence doesnt offend me or anything silly like that. I just didnt like it. If you do decide to work on a more structured project in the future, building off what youve learned with this game I would totally try it out.
that is one of the problem of my game. as i just started with it, obviously the beginning of it is very shitty (in all way maybe), it (i think) obviously goes better while it progress. i know that alots of peoples may not pass througth that and just stop before half of it or else, and so, will have a bad opinion about the game based on only the beginning.
i should redo the beginning, but i consider it as bad to not progress but instead re-do the whole thing. i prefer honestly end the game by completing it before remake it better. that way, it wont stop progress or make me fee like i scam or something by puttin no new stuff in it and just remake something that peoples already played. its a risky move, but i think its more honest to do.
like i say alots of time, i not plan to make the best game ever, i know i have no chance against some pro , teams or heavily powered devs. i just make my own little shit on my own little corner, like a small restaurant owned by an old gran'ma.. its not a luxury restaurant, but sometime you eat better in there than in luxury restaurant, with a different ambience and all.... (well, thats just a shitty comparison, but i hope it give an idea of my point of view XD).

and like isay in the very beginning of this thread. i take it all ! all i ask is peoples to give a try, that cost nothing but a bit of time, and if they dont like it, its fixed. if they like it, then they find the cool stuff.
not to blame or shame anybody, but i prefer have a cool small community around my game, than an over populated super fast growing community with bad things. (i noticed that most, if not all, the peoples who like my game didnt ask me to change this or that or to do this or that and change the way of the game. they like it as it is. and i think that's great . i see in alots of big game , peoples always asking for a change in the game and sometime that can turn the game badly because what please some peoples , wont please others.)

as for reviews, i dont ask for, even tho i would like more of them :). lots of peoples didnt give their opinion, its a bit sad because its important part in development. but well, i dont want to force anybody. as long 1 person like my game, i m happy (and i love to do it, soo its all good. it doesnt feel like a pain or else , like it could be if i didnt liked what i do. but that's not the case. i m loving it ! padapapapaaaaa ! :D)
 
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I, personally, like this game and enjoy playing it.

I may be biased for 2 reasons;
1. I genuinely like the "Python-esque" nature that the game has, it's absurd an non-sensical in a fun way. It really has no peers for content on this site. It's isn't meant to be serious- that's stated clearly when the game begins. It's "wtf" for wtf's sake. :)
2. I am one of the proofreaders for this game. There are some things that may be deliberately left the way the are in order to maintain some of Macam's originality- as this is, ultimately, his game. Changing things too much would/could change the spirit of the game. They're broken and meant to be that way. There are also some instances where they're "tweaked" to suit the nuances of some characters or meant to read phonetically, so that you can "hear" the character speak. Lastly, they could just be oversights when reading the script. :p

Admittedly, as someone who has been out of H.S. for more than 20 years- I may not remember everything from A.H. English class and/or some of the rules of grammar have changed over the years. :) Some of us just do the best we can for a game that we love and want to help out where possible. :)

Bravo to you Macadam for taking the high-road. You have a thick-skin and took the criticism really well- there are some dev's who probably would have turned this whole thing into a flame war and it would have just gone on for pages and pages. I think both of you handled this situation in a civil and pleasant fashion. Someone didn't like the game and voiced their opinion about it. The creator responded without taking it personally or taking it out on the other person. If only more people that used forums could follow this example. :)

Also, not to nit-pick...but I love the irony of someone who critiques someone's English and misspells "doesn't" and "you're". Lol
 

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[QUOTE = "Safetydummy, post: 1603497, member: 386151"] Eu, pessoalmente, gosto desse jogo e gosto de jogar.

Eu posso ser parcial por 2 razões;
1. Eu realmente gosto da natureza "Python-esque" que o jogo tem, é absurdo um não-sensacional de uma forma divertida. Não tem pares para conteúdo neste site. Não é para ser sério - isso é dito claramente quando o jogo começa. É "wtf" por causa do wtf.:)
2. Eu sou um dos revisores para este jogo. Há algumas coisas que podem ser deliberadamente deixadas do jeito que são, a fim de manter algumas das originalidades de Macam - como este é, em última análise, o seu jogo. Mudar demais as coisas poderia / poderia mudar o espírito do jogo. Eles estão quebrados e significados para ser assim. Há também alguns casos em que eles são "ajustados" para se adequar às nuances de alguns caracteres ou para ler foneticamente, de modo que você possa "ouvir" o personagem falar. Por último, eles poderiam ser apenas descuidos ao ler o roteiro. : p

É certo que, como alguém que está fora do HS há mais de 20 anos, posso não lembrar de tudo da aula de Inglês da AH e / ou algumas das regras da gramática mudaram ao longo dos anos. :) Alguns de nós apenas fazem o melhor que podemos para um jogo que amamos e queremos ajudar sempre que possível.:)

Bravo para você Macadam para pegar a estrada. Você tem uma pele grossa e levou as críticas muito bem, há alguns devs que provavelmente teriam transformado essa coisa toda em uma guerra de chamas e teria acabado de passar por páginas e páginas. Eu acho que vocês dois lidaram com essa situação de uma forma civil e agradável. Alguém não gostou do jogo e expressou sua opinião sobre isso. O criador respondeu sem levá-lo pessoalmente ou tirá-lo da outra pessoa. Se apenas mais pessoas que usaram fóruns pudessem seguir este exemplo. :)

Além disso, não para nit-pick ... mas eu amo a ironia de alguém que critica inglês de alguém e erros ortográficos "não" e "você é". Lol [/ QUOTE]


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Wow, I've never had anything translated before- that I've written. Lol Gracias

Just make sure you don't get in trouble with the Mods- (I believe) all posts have to be in English. :p
 
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