Enthralled & Consent: Development Thread, and my other works & projects.

OK, so I'm moving all of the Enthralled story so far into this post, seeing that it's at the top of page 5. This story is still a work in progress, where I share stuff as I go along.

For those that may have clicked on my sig pic or otherwise followed a link here, here's the 'jist'.

Enthralled: A Squienis Story is my 'Unofficial' Fan Fiction Crossover story, which 'borrows' four actresses/models that are used in four other porn games, along with loose references to their backstories in said games, to tell an entirely new story.

Note that this is being told in 'comics' format, and is not a game. It's a linear story, so I didn't see any point in complicating things with a VN/Game engine.

It evolved from my doing various renders in the relevant game and fan art threads. At some point, I decided it'd be fun to do a fairly short crossover story involving these four gals.

The story I'm telling takes a number of liberties with the various backstories, so don't expect it to be 'canon'. Think of the gals in these stories as actresses hired to play followup roles, not as the characters from those stories.

This story involves Squienises, PenTentacles, and Minotaurs having sex and other fun sexy time with our gals, as well as orgy and gangbang sex. If you have any particular 'attachment' to any of these gals, i.e. if you don't like seeing other guys and creatures banging your favorite characters, this story may not be for you.

Disclaimer: I am doing this for free, as a personal fan project. I do not have a Patreon at present. I'm just doing this for fun, and also as an excuse to set up renders, scenes, etc... Hopefully others will find this story enjoyable. It is being offered for free, as an F95Zone exclusive, and is not to be offered for sale anywhere else. If someone ends up 'buying' this from some other site, yeah they're getting ripped off.

This is a work in progress.
A number of additional renders/story panels are planned, and will be added to this thread as I make progress on the story. This story is being separated into two parts for now, as there is a suitable 'break point' in the story I'm using as a goalpost. The majority of the renders I have planned for Part 1 are done, but I still have a few more planned. I'll be focusing on the Part 2 renders once I've 'filled in' the blanks/missing panels in Part 1. For now, the Part 2 panels that I've already shared should be considered as teaser panels - once I tie up 'loose ends' in Part 1, I'll be able to do the rest of the Part 2 panels. I'll also be adjusting the dialogue for continuity in the existing panels from time to time.

Note that I haven't assigned numbers to the pages as of yet. Once I've worked out a 'final number' of panels for Part 1, I'll update the relevant panels with the actual page numbers. Same for Part 2.

Once I have completed Part 1, I'll compile these and post them in a separate thread, so that (hopefully) this story can be added to the Comics section on this site.

Enjoy!

OK, now that the housekeeping is out of the way...



This story includes incest themes, bestiality/creature sex, group sex, and a bit of 'regular' sex. And lots of nudity. If these themes offend you, stop reading now!

Just posting my planned sig banner pic here for later:


To keep things simple, I'm putting everything under a master spoiler tag. Note that here are several panels containing nudity, sex, and creature sex contained within this master spoiler tag...


Enthralled: my Squienis Story, Intro and Part 1 (incomplete)


Part 1 ends here.

Enthralled: my Squienis Story, Part 2 teasers

Just a note that there's only a few panels done for part 2 currently, so there isn't a lot of continuity as of yet. Just letting y'all know, in case you want to 'hold off' on opening the Part 2 spoiler tag until I have more renders done.

After Meg finishes telling the gals what happened, we come back to the present. Part 2 picks up with the first panel below. The subsequent panels happen after the gals shower, and reunite with their Dads/Brother.


And that's what I have for the story so far...

Note that I'll be adding additional panels to this post from time to time, similar to what I've been doing in the previous post.

Just a quick update.

I'm adding panels to the post at the top of page 5 as I complete them, for easy reference. Note that I am also reworking/need to rework a few panels as I get a better feel for the nuances in the story and dialogue presentation as i go along. I'm adding new panels pretty much daily to that post.

There's about two dozen panels for Part 1 so far, and i have a few more planned (Mainly Meg and Trace stage time, as well as a few more conversational panels). As I noted before, Part 2 isn't anywhere near done, as I'm focused on part 1 at the moment. Yeah there are a number of panels planned for part 2 as well...

I don't have any particular 'page count' in mind for this story. It looks like it'll be a few dozen panels when I'm done, but my goal here is to visualize and tell the story I have in mind, while keeping my time investment somewhat short.

I'm setting up a number of interacting poses by hand as I'm creating scene shots, which is meticulous work. Especially when multiple characters are involved... so it's slow going. Plus, the renders are taking a while to complete, due to how the locations are set up. I'm not complaining, just letting y'all know that this will take me a while...

Note that I'm as excited to see the results as a few of y'all are, I'm sure! Patience...

It's supposed to be a short story, but the various interactions have resulted in my needing to come up with a few more panels than I originally envisioned. With four main characters to follow in the story, and their SO's, yeah there are a number of interactions still planned. And there are a handful of supporting characters that are part of the story as well, that I don't want to completely neglect either.

Anyways, so yeah, I'm still currently very focused on/plugging away at Enthralled. Consent? Someday...

For those following this, thanks again for your interest in this thingie that I'm doing mainly just for fun!

LP83 said:

Gotta love all the boob grabbing on the Starring Panels

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I had to find SOMEWHERE to put all of those hands. Plus, boobies are meant to be fondled!!! And sucked on...

It was either that or vagina fingering... I decided to save the vagina stuff for later!


I suppose I could have went the more conservative route, and put clothes on them in the starring panels, but I'm making it clear at the outset that this fanfic will be using clothing sparingly... and will involve LOTS of sexy fun time! Less story, more sex!

I figure that, since the 'based on characters' have been getting busy already, I didn't see the point in 'building up' to anything in the one on one department... instead, I figured that showing those relationships in a new context might be interesting to some, plus I like crossovers!

Meg is the only 'based on' character that needs significant additional backstory to open the incest route, as we were left hanging when that game was abandoned. Yeah I went a 'different way' with her, so it's an alternate timeline or some such thing. Really, it's an alternate timeline/setting for all of the 'based on' characters!

I do have that Dad harem that I'll need to briefly explain though... and how/why Dee's onboard with it! We'll see if I can reasonably explain things in say two panels without a wall of text... I want to keep it brief.

But Enthralled IS supposed to be about Squeenie after all! Squeenie will be the main focus of Part 2 - Part 1 is really just a 'lead in' to the actual story, although it has a LOT of sex...

OK, my current render is done baking. Back to the grindstone!

JJsworld said:

We need more D...

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There are a couple more panels planned for D for Part 1, but they will mainly be setup/backstory pieces. I may re-render one of the panels using Elena Mk II though... I was using the wrong hair, and she didn't quite look like Elena.

That's why I got sidetracked dialing in a new version of Elena yesterday (see DMD Art Assets thread).

On another note, I was thinking about including Alice (from DoD) in the story, but I have a lot of characters included already. She's very likely going to appear in a backstory panel, but I've previously done artwork which features Alice working at a strip club (see below). I feel like she'd just be an additional distraction (much as I like her), so I'm pondering that one...



Edit: So, I decided that Alice and her Mom have other plans this evening, but she at least drops by earlier in the evening to entertain the peeps. There's enough other stuff going on already, plus we've already seen the harem thing in her 'backstory'...

So Alice at least makes an appearance in one of the panels for Part 1 (see post 81, above), which is better than not at all I guess...

Alice and Mom may appear in Part 2, plus she's in a flashback panel (not added yet) for part 1...

I want the focus on Trace, Meg, Dee, and Kate. Dee's BFF's aside of course - we haven't seen that yet in Dee's 'backstory' so I couldn't leave well enough alone...

I snuck in a couple of panels yesterday to the WIP post at the top of this page, mainly just adding narration to stuff I've already shared, plus I added another Kate + Dad panel (it was kind of done before, i just needed to do some post work and some narration).

I had an issue with Elena's head looking weird from the side, so one of the planned panels is taking longer than anticipated, as I continue to fine tune Elena.

Also, due to the 'extra partner' thing that has happened with Dee and Katie? Well I'm currently going over personal options (i.e. options from my 'stable' of characters) for Trace and Meg. I like the idea of each gal having an 'unplanned' partner during the evening, so I want to stick with that, since it 'mixes things up' a bit.

Meg is a special case, due to what happens to her in the added backstory, so in my mind she's very picky about who gets to have happy fun time with her. So this won't just be a 'random' thing, as in my mind Meg just doesn't do random hookups, especially after what happened...

I'm in a somewhat similar boat with Trace, but I have an idea there that 'fits' with how I perceive her personality and backstory.

Yeah I'm probably overthinking this, but then its my silly vision of a story, so I want to be happy with how it goes.

Enough boring blah blah, back to rendering!

Edit: Note that I have I added two panels featuring Alice and Marcus to the story above, featuring them as a 'warmup act'...

Edit 2: Just added four panels to the story featuring Trace and her Brother. I'm almost in the home stretch for Part 1, probably less than a dozen panels to go!!!


Edit 3: BTW, if you were wondering what Fynne and Evany look like...



Yeah if the waitstaff at my local strip club dressed like this, assuming that they had the bodies for it of course... well I can dream anyways!

Just another filler panel.

I really like Onyx (3D model by Rhiannon), so I decided to include her in the story.

In the mix with DJ Onyx...



Edit: Couldn't resist. DJ Onyx has a sex scene now... with Trace and a guy!
The relevant panels have been added to post 81 above!

Assuming that I don't change my mind, it looks like only 8 panels to go to wrap up part 1! That'll be a total of 48 panels btw... I like the idea of an even 4 dozen.

Spermabear said:

From wich game did Meg came from? I cant find it....

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Apologies for the delay in responding to this. I've been focused on rendering, and wanted to hold off until I had an update on my progress.

Meg is a homage to Meghan from Teacher's Pets (Irredeemable).

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So guys, figured I should post an update, since I'm close to wrapping up Part 1 of Enthralled: A Squienis story.

So, I posted up Part 1 here for now:


I've submitted the thread to a moderator, with the request that it be moved to the Comics section as appropriate. Assuming no issues, I'll leave breadcrumbs in the appropriate threads at that time, and update my sig with a link.

Edit: Thread has been moved to the Comics section. Thanks Muttdoggy!

OK, so I'm taking a small break before jumping into Part 2 of Enthralled.

I've been wanting to put Krampus to use since I snagged him though...

Just posting this pic here for archival purposes (it's also in another thread).


Edit: also archiving this:

And this...



Also archiving this...



Also archiving this here just because: