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unless interested to be betatester i wouldn't bother until saves can be transferred between versions since its damn frustrating to talk to prefects (makes me want to kill them) and doing it again on each version is next to nightmare.
 

Khan

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unless interested to be betatester i wouldn't bother until saves can be transferred between versions since its damn frustrating to talk to prefects (makes me want to kill them) and doing it again on each version is next to nightmare.
Check options, there are skip

2 years, and still v0.1B... 2030 is a very optimistic prediction XD But I have to admit... I love the art
Compare 0.0.3 and 0.0.4 (the gap between them half a year) if this is not enought for you, there's nothing we can do for you.

No, not really. You might get something out of unpacking the pictures and admiring the general artwork, but there is nothing worthwhile in terms of erotic-content. Writing is still trash as well, and makes actually playing this creation its own special form of torture.
You lie, we have at least one sex scene and full of eroticism both on a location, and with characters.
 
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huhy05

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chapter 4 perfects meeting part 6 : there's no option to talk about the meeting for
Helena Ravenclaw, is my game bugged ?
p/s: i followed the walkthrough.
 

DARKHUMOUR

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Can anyone tell me if there's actually some new erotic contents ? Because for the last time i played was a complete waste of time since there's nothing, limited playable game content...v....v
 

Khan

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Can anyone tell me if there's actually some new erotic contents ? Because for the last time i played was a complete waste of time since there's nothing, limited playable game content...v....v
Wait until next public version
 
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jughead004

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Only on Chapter 2 but is Petrius... Little Sally? The fucking painting he made? o_O And eyepatch girl, is that the other painting from when MG and Snape were talking? Or am I delirious??
 

Acetone

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Jul 20, 2018
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This game has great art, shame that the content is a bit sparse on the sexual side. But the content that is there is pretty good. Not sure about replayability of the game from what we have now though.
 

JoeBanks

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Only on Chapter 2 but is Petrius... Little Sally? The fucking painting he made? o_O And eyepatch girl, is that the other painting from when MG and Snape were talking? Or am I delirious??
Not the same lol.


This game has great art, shame that the content is a bit sparse on the sexual side. But the content that is there is pretty good. Not sure about replayability of the game from what we have now though.
They have plans for new content, as addressed previously, the art takes the longest. There will also be new mechanics added to the game.
 

JoeBanks

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Also the release this month (at the end of the month) is for 5 dollar Patreons. So if you're interested to see anything new, you can check it out. Page 1 has the Patreon link. Or you can wait until the public release.
 

lookatall

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Finally gave this a try because it looks like a trainer game with good art, well...

After grinding away for a few hours, most recently studying papers so I can study manuals so I can get more information so I can study a manual (yes, the game is very very dry), I moved on to the next part where I had to summon a NPC on a certain day, at a certain time, so I can get a certain item... that I realized that I was still yet to see any H content, I gave up.

The game desperately needs to be streamlined, it's more work and less game in its current state, and with there being no pot of gold at the end of the rainbow (no scenes, no written scenes e.g. witch trainer, no events, no corruption, no training, no flirting, no nothing), you're going to lose most people within the first hour or two.

The backgrounds and interface look great at least.
 

darkmoonhydra

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No save scumming? Right clicking doesnt bring up the save menu. Only way I've been able to save is through the blue barrel thing in the office?
 

smite2001

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Considering how heavily edited the game has been on the writing side, I can't assume you have played it recently and actually read it.
Most glaring spelling and grammar errors have been removed, but that is proofreading, not editing. The dialogue is still wooden and just bad on many levels, there is way too much needless exposition, the characters - even the ones lifted from original HP - are all weird, none of the jokes are funny or follow any comedic structure and the overall concept of the story is confusing and poorly thought out. None of this would pass a proper round of editing.

You lie, we have at least one sex scene and full of eroticism both on a location, and with characters.
I said the ero-content is not "worthwhile". Having a sexscene with the oldest witch in the fucking universe is not considered worthwhile, except for a select few deviants.
Player: "Oh, a game about corrupting innocent witches, lets check it out"
[1000 years of terrible exposition later]
Game: "Here, you can fuck the oldest hag available"
[10000 years of terrible writing later. Minor erotic teasers occasionally sprinkled in]
Game: "end of current version"
 

Khan

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Most glaring spelling and grammar errors have been removed, but that is proofreading, not editing. The dialogue is still wooden and just bad on many levels, there is way too much needless exposition, the characters - even the ones lifted from original HP - are all weird, none of the jokes are funny or follow any comedic structure and the overall concept of the story is confusing and poorly thought out. None of this would pass a proper round of editing.



I said the ero-content is not "worthwhile". Having a sexscene with the oldest witch in the fucking universe is not considered worthwhile, except for a select few deviants.
Player: "Oh, a game about corrupting innocent witches, lets check it out"
[1000 years of terrible exposition later]
Game: "Here, you can fuck the oldest hag available"
[10000 years of terrible writing later. Minor erotic teasers occasionally sprinkled in]
Game: "end of current version"
1. If you do not like the story, then most likely the game is not for you, many on the contrary note good jokes, perhaps some are lost in the translation into English, but it is already difficult to translate.
2.Compare 0.0.3 and 0.0.4 (the gap between them half a year) if this is not enought for you, there's nothing we can do for you.
We have a slow corruption in the game and no one will let you fuck the main girls for 5 points or a handful of coins. If you need games just jerk off, go play other games, for example on a 3D render or honey select, there you will be able to quench his thirst.
In our game there is a lot of eroticism, and pornography will be at the final stages or in the middle, depending on the choice of a branch of communication of the character

No save scumming? Right clicking doesnt bring up the save menu. Only way I've been able to save is through the blue barrel thing in the office?
Check options before play
 

Khan

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I like the art and story but the grind is way too much.
Most frustrating the fact half the time you didn't learn something in class cus of some upskirt (you don't get to see) or something making it even harder and the walk back and forth to the bathroom to jack off or the library is useless due to too high arousal. 2 hours into the game and i saw 1 (man)boob and got a kiss. Sorry but i'm gonna waste my time on another game. I'll check back in a year or so. Best of luck to the dev.
In our game, a lot of branches of the passage and you do not even see half
 

smite2001

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1. If you do not like the story, then most likely the game is not for you, many on the contrary note good jokes, perhaps some are lost in the translation into English, but it is already difficult to translate.
2.Compare 0.0.3 and 0.0.4 (the gap between them half a year) if this is not enought for you, there's nothing we can do for you.
If you are so naive and you have a unfortunately overexcited, forced to disappoint you, we have a slow corruption in the game and no one will let you fuck the main girls for 5 points or a handful of coins. If you need games just jerk off, go play other games, for example on a 3D render or honey select, there you will be able to quench his thirst.
In our game there is a lot of eroticism, and pornography will be at the final stages or in the middle, depending on the choice of a branch of communication of the character
1. The writing just ignores all the rules even a rookie author should follow to make a pleasant reading experience. For specifics, refer to the first post you quoted. There are good guides and references freely available on the internet for "Writing 101", please read them for the sake of your patreons. The same is true for the comedy. There are methods to make good jokes, but you never use even one of them. The stuff you improvise is just too tasteless and not witty at all.

2. Your game had a significant overhaul, but dont insult the people supporting you by claiming you work fast.

What annoys me is that you claim that you make something not intended to be sexual, but you at the same sell it as such. Just look at the two images you use for the main menu, first with Hermoine and now Daphne. There is no way a person seeing those and reading the description for your game would think "Well, there is probably no teenage sex in this game, and wont be for a while". You clearly make a promise to potential players by implying that there is sex, and that it is a major focus.
It would be a bit better if the writing was actually good, or even OK-ish, but it is objectively(!) terrible, even as fanfiction. Which it isnt, it is a commercial product.
 
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