Ren'Py Fashion Business [Ep.4 v6.00 Extra] [DecentMonkey]

[phreakinowski]

Honest personal opinion... this game is ruined by it's RPGMaker qualities. It's says "Other", but this plays like every other crappy RPGMaker game I have tried and detested. The imagery is nice, the MC is reprehensible and unlikable... but that could end up being a positive for the "gets what she deserves" story line... but what completely kills the game for me is the RPGMaker gameplay and pointless slow ass map navigation that just starts making you curse at the computer as you play. The game start was a slow, meandering pointlessness that just went on and on. Had you had all those same images and told the story in a Renpy type format then I would likely feel entirely different. But after 30 minutes of trudging thru this fucking gameplay I am done. No thank you, deleted. Won't touch this again unless it gets rebuilt in a different engine, just not remotely worth the frustration of dealing will slow moving little sprites on a pointless map clicking on sparkly shit that doesn't matter to the story. Argh... gawd I hate the gameplay of RPGMaker games and their like. If you happen to like it, have fun... but while the story and images seem interesting, they are just not enough to overcome the utter shit of this game engine and the gameplay it results in.

 

[Firebless]

Thank you DecentMonkey for this "flawed" masterpiece. This game is pure art and digs deep into peoples emotions. Even haters of the game are still thinking of it for days after. They will all come back every update you provide us and most will change their opinions as you correct the flaws. Although my enjoyment of the game is immense as is, i get the RPGM engine, slow car rides and long walks are a detriment to most. Heck, I thought i was playing Frogger just trying to get from point A to B, and yet it was frustratingly funny for me.

The slow build up of the story and the amazing art kept me enthralled. Sure was slow, but like the best written stories, makes the results all the more rewarding. Some might ask what results, but they not get that the trip is where the fun is and not in the destination. A day after playing im still thinking about this game, when most games i play here get deleted as soon as i finish them.

Im eagerly awaiting your updates for more content and fixes so game runs smoother. But please maintain the slow pace of the story building slowly to the innevitable sexual encounters. Dont rush to a sexfest just to satisfy a few people dont know what they really want. They think they want some sex scenes in a short time to fap and delete then feel empty. But you are giving them a longer lasting experience by appealing to something deeper.

 

[Joe Steel]

Probably best when you want to offer constructive criticism to avoid claiming that other players, with other interests in the game, are wrong and should be ignored. Stick to talking about the game.

 

[Firebless]

Probably best when you want to offer constructive criticism to avoid claiming that other players, with other interests in the game, are wrong and should be ignored. Stick to talking about the game.

You are not wrong and your opinions should not be ignored. In fact i agree with the games flaws as called by others. My purpose when mentioning others was so the game creator doesnt get frustrated and stop adding fixes and content. I think is a great game needs some polish but not too much as to ruin his original conception of story. A happy game creator is good for all of us.

 

[Badboll]

Great game I had so suffer through that prison stuff for 10 days and what happens, she gets hosed down by the fat retard who shouldnt have that job and permanently gets stuck in the fucking doorway...

 

[Badboll]

Theres a full list of saves just a couple posts above to get past anything you stuck at. I usually get past some stuck parts by using the arrows keys or the mouse alternately and hitting enter.

That works for people not a doorway you have phased into. Looked through the pictures and video folders and noticed there isnt much content to this game yet. It's way too poorly written for me to waste any more time on. I wasted enough already.

 

[ilovenudemods]

Excited to try this one, but based on the comments, I'm gonna give it 6 months before I do. I hope it's got a lot more content then.

 

[sevensham]

There's wine in one of the racks, drop it.

thanks

 

[Amfunny]

I went to the my old house but can't find dick and need a place to sleep where do i go lol

 

[Amfunny]

Did you check Hotel? Visited Dick office? Then go to the clothing shop.

Thanks! Is there a walkthrough for this? I'm lost right now waiting for Dick and it says come back later to see if he's come back

 

[Joe Steel]

Thanks! Is there a walkthrough for this? I'm lost right now waiting for Dick and it says come back later to see if he's come back

Just walk around for a few minutes and go back to the secretary. Eventually MC will find that Dick won't be back that day, and then she gets to go to the hotel and finally the store.

 

[The_fallen_dragon]

Who was the first?

i dont remember the name of a game, but it was the main female character mother, basically, she dominated every damn body to the point where if the husband behaved himself that his reward would be to rub her feet. The daughter is barely any better.

 

[The_fallen_dragon]

I'm glad that Monica could cause so many emotions of the players! There are so many games now and so many characters that stand out against their background is very difficult.
I did the job very well

You just made me said that this game has no rape -_-

 

[Sakrilas]

In the future, Monica will go through all the circles of hell.
It will begin with episode 2

Just out of curiosity, how long you think it will take until we have an episode 2 release? (Are you planning on releasing partials along the development?)

 

[Sakrilas]

Thanks for the quick reply. Serious respect on the fact that you created your own game engine.

Looking forward to the next updates.

It's a pity to see the RPGM style go, I'm a big fan of it, but I see that a lot of people think differently, so I totally understand your point.

 

[nuclearbomb]

New on the forum but wanted to leave my initial thoughts about the game anyway.

Great character design and overall graphics on (most) characters, you have really chosen some great assets that I can't wait to see what happens too. The story got potential and I enjoyed it so far with seeing her living a wonderful life, while being a bitch towards everybody but suddenly having all that taken away from her. Really can't wait to see what karma has in store for her :angel: But as people has been saying so do you really need to tighten up the gameplay, it is just too slow and pointless in the sense as like it is now so is its only function to slow the phase of the game down to a crawl. That might not have been what you where going for but that's frankly it's only function atm. My tip to you is to just scrap that part of the game and keep the map, we don't have to literally walk from point A to point B to just continue the story. Instead have it as a map where you just click on the next location, simple and quick. Lida's adventure had the same problem, the walking was pointless.. Sure, some quests made sense for it but they could easily have been rewritten for more traditional VN type of gameplay. Heck if you can find a way to not make it be a chore as it is right now then cool I will not complain as I can and do enjoy some RPGM games, when the gameplay is both fun and well implemented. Also proofreading, but I won't give you shit for that so early on in the development.

Other than that so will I keep a look on this game since it got loads of potential and it hits some kinks I enjoy a lot but don't see used to much. So keep it up, already seeing you taking the criticism quite good so I got hopes that you will manage to turn this into something excellent

 

[Firebless]

We are in luck, this DecentMonkey guy has to be the most committed to the opinions of the players in the F95 forums. Im sure this game can just get better and better. My only worry is that with so many opinions and different tastes on kinks the story could be rushed and go all over the place and the creator loses his original premise which is pure gold.

 

[pgXIII]

This game seems very promising hope the designer continues with it and finishes it, I did hate I had to install it and I wish it was renpy but those are not deal breakers this game is beautiful.

 

[Firebless]

Its a shame the RPGM isnt appreciated by most. He did create a very big city, heavily populated and all those cars and traffic, the city feels alive. And the rain and thunder poor Monica had to walk thru, that was beautiful. I wonder how much work he put into it, only to see here the feedback is not too great on that regard.

Im on the majority opinion here though that it can be better as a VN/Renpy with clickable maps to travel to. But i did love the car dialogues going on from inside the car while traveling, that added to the immersion. Hope he doesnt cut any of the story and dialogue. In Renpy its easy for players to skip fast by clicking the mouse if you dont like to read them, we all win.

 

[GrimCreeper3]

Prison simulator