- Apr 28, 2018
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My thoughts about the game;
The first upload left me annoyed with Wetdreamwalker, it was an almost exact copy My New Family. However, I also decided to give them a chance to change the upcoming story. So I restarted with the new update and am feeling better, first because they acknowledged Killer7 as the inspiration for this story, and second they at least made some changes as to not be a basic carbon copy of MNF. I hope to see this story branch further out away from MNF as it has outstanding potential to do so. Wetdreamwalker Please continue this story and branch away from MNF as you go. There can, and will, always be similarities between stories, especially when one has inspired you so much. But take the time to make this your story, as now I am eagerly awaiting the next upload.
Also, is there a thread where typo's are discussed in a calm and reasonable manor? I did notice a couple and wanted to bring them to your attention if you wanted.
The first upload left me annoyed with Wetdreamwalker, it was an almost exact copy My New Family. However, I also decided to give them a chance to change the upcoming story. So I restarted with the new update and am feeling better, first because they acknowledged Killer7 as the inspiration for this story, and second they at least made some changes as to not be a basic carbon copy of MNF. I hope to see this story branch further out away from MNF as it has outstanding potential to do so. Wetdreamwalker Please continue this story and branch away from MNF as you go. There can, and will, always be similarities between stories, especially when one has inspired you so much. But take the time to make this your story, as now I am eagerly awaiting the next upload.
Also, is there a thread where typo's are discussed in a calm and reasonable manor? I did notice a couple and wanted to bring them to your attention if you wanted.
The game is more unique with the re-write. Nice teasing so far, especially with the blond daughter. Chloe character actually looks MUCH better without makeup - hope she will transition to that look permanently, or it seems a waste of her design. Still think Teagan needs a completely new design. She's supposed to be 25 or something, but honestly looks like she's in her 50's. Great re-boot of the game overall though!
- Aug 7, 2021
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Hi everybody! I created a discord server. If anyone is interested I look forward to seeing you.
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hey, can anyone tell me how to get the scene in the 4th pic? i just seem to miss it no matter what i do.
thanks in advance.
thanks in advance.
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Noooo... She is way too cute for that, damn...Have a negative score with blonde.
But thanks, great game so far! ^^
- Jun 11, 2021
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isn't the MC supposed to be like 35, Dude's out here already rocking grandpa hair lol.
Also what I don't get is why he's seen as a father figure for the girls, he was practically a kid when he met them, dude was like 19 so I highly doubt he was much of a "father figure" for 3 girls. the older one was already 9 at the time so for them to see him as a father figure is a bit weird, perhaps less weird for the younger sisters seeing that they were 2 and 3 at the time but it's still more likely that they'd see him as an older brother rather than a father figure, but now we have a 25 year old calling a 35 year old "dad" , make no sense.
And even if we ignore the age problem it still makes no sense theyd be *that* close to him. MC was arrested 16 years ago, 16 years ago he was 19 which means he barely spent time with the girls cause he got arrested shortly after he met them.. Sure he spend a few months taking care of the girls after their mother died but no way could they have build such a relationship in such a short amount of time. I reckon the MC should be made older for this shit to make any sense or better yet change the father/daughter storyline to brother/sister. just because he dated their mom for a year doesn't make him their father lol, realistically he's just some dude who banged their mom and took care of them for a short while
Also what I don't get is why he's seen as a father figure for the girls, he was practically a kid when he met them, dude was like 19 so I highly doubt he was much of a "father figure" for 3 girls. the older one was already 9 at the time so for them to see him as a father figure is a bit weird, perhaps less weird for the younger sisters seeing that they were 2 and 3 at the time but it's still more likely that they'd see him as an older brother rather than a father figure, but now we have a 25 year old calling a 35 year old "dad" , make no sense.
And even if we ignore the age problem it still makes no sense theyd be *that* close to him. MC was arrested 16 years ago, 16 years ago he was 19 which means he barely spent time with the girls cause he got arrested shortly after he met them.. Sure he spend a few months taking care of the girls after their mother died but no way could they have build such a relationship in such a short amount of time. I reckon the MC should be made older for this shit to make any sense or better yet change the father/daughter storyline to brother/sister. just because he dated their mom for a year doesn't make him their father lol, realistically he's just some dude who banged their mom and took care of them for a short while
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I think all these problems come from the Dev trying to make another MNF but with a dad as MC instead of a brother/son.
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- Jun 11, 2021
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Yeah that would make waay more sense... But it seems like the dev put little thought into this story. Like I'm not saying the game is bad or anything it's just the relationship between MC and the girls itself makes no sense.. If he's their biological father it wouldn't be weird for them to take him in whether they had a relationship in the past or not and from there on we can work on building either a father/daughter relationship or more... But as it stands rn the girls practically invited a stranger to live with them and act like they've known him all their life as a father figure... And yeah Tegan should've definitely been made younger given the fact that the MC himself is not that old.. I'll say it once again, a 25 year old calling a 35 year old "dad" is just weird
If the dev made the MC 45 years old it would still be an ok age for a MC and we can have more time with the girls. Just cluster them closer in age and have the MC be a part of their lives longer.
You are right him being 35 feels off.
- Apr 10, 2020
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Its not too far off from being feasible. The mc in another game I am writing is 38. The way mine is written he started with his childhood girl friend and had thier first child at 18 and last child by the time he hit 20 giving him 3 girls all over 18 by the time he turned 38 so maybe the dev of this one should at least adjust the age to what mine is set to to make it more realistic. that is as long as he didnt start having children at 16 instead.