Ren'Py Completed Corruption [Final] [Mr.C]

[King Monkey Mon]

Opinions are like arseholes man, everyone has one. (even if yours are wrong lol)

Though lets not forget this is the Corruption thread, not the DF thread.
If you want to bash that game might want to do it there.

To be clear I have nothing against negative feedback like most of what you just wrote, a lot of that is a justifiable stance. You just can't tell people that they're stupid for pledging to something they like, that's not cool.

"Opinions are like arseholes man, everyone has one. (even if yours are wrong lol)" i agree with this and yeah i think people should only pledge if a creator earns the trust of the supporter but hey its not my business how people wastes/spends their money

 

[Lookingforthis]

That and the writing just frigging sucks.

That's....no.

It really doesn't. To wit, every single character has a distinct "voice" in the game, with fluency changing on whomever is speaking. Monologues are very well articulated and it all comes off as very "organic".

Your beef, I think, has mainly to do with PLOT rather then WRITING, as the pace of the game is so slow it might as well not be a porn game. But take away aaaaaall the porn, titillation and promises of sex, what are we left with?

A pretty good romance story. I have no idea what your gender is, so I am not going to make any assumptions, but have you by any chance read any Harliquin novels? They are very formulaic in that they are always feel good stories where the main leads are basically the top of the cream in terms of desirability. DF, by comparison, is the anti-Harliquin novel because it starts depressing and it's not interested in "fixing" the situation so much as providing a vehicle through which the romance in it can flourish.

It's very clear that the tone is trying to go for is "Bitter-sweet" and as such the immediately apparent character flaws that everyone has serve a purpose. It's planned rather then it being a failure of writing characters and THAT makes a difference since it actively contributes to the story.

You could argue that not a single one of those things lead to a good PORN game, but I really would contend that it necessarily means that it's a bad product.

 

[King Monkey Mon]

That's....no.

It really doesn't. To wit, every single character has a distinct "voice" in the game, with fluency changing on whomever is speaking. Monologues are very well articulated and it all comes off as very "organic".

Your beef, I think, has mainly to do with PLOT rather then WRITING, as the pace of the game is so slow it might as well not be a porn game. But take away aaaaaall the porn, titillation and promises of sex, what are we left with?

A pretty good romance story. I have no idea what your gender is, so I am not going to make any assumptions, but have you by any chance read any Harliquin novels? They are very formulaic in that they are always feel good stories where the main leads are basically the top of the cream in terms of desirability. DF, by comparison, is the anti-Harliquin novel because it starts depressing and it's not interested in "fixing" the situation so much as providing a vehicle through which the romance in it can flourish.

It's very clear that the tone is trying to go for is "Bitter-sweet" and as such the immediately apparent character flaws that everyone has serve a purpose. It's planned rather then it being a failure of writing characters.

your talking about dual family right? sorry but i dont see the point of fapping to suicidal models best story driving porn game is dating my daughter since theres always an actual h scene in the update to make sure you get your moneys worth and its not always the same girl thats the problem with dual family only the cousin gets the content it seems like

 

[DRKNX]

Does anyone has an idea what could cause this?

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/michelle.rpy", line 36, in script
  File "game/michelle.rpy", line 36, in <module>
NameError: global name 'level_of_chief' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/michelle.rpy", line 36, in script
  File "D:\Games\corruption-v0.90-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 814, in execute
    renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
  File "D:\Games\corruption-v0.90-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1715, in py_exec_bytecode
    exec bytecode in globals, locals
  File "game/michelle.rpy", line 36, in <module>
  File "L:\compile\lib\pythonlib2.7\AONmod.py", line 898, in randint
NameError: global name 'level_of_chief' is not defined

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.12.3.2123
corruption 0.90

it's the cheat mod (AON), doesn't work with the new level scene of michelle

 

[Lookingforthis]

your talking about dual family right? sorry but i dont see the point of fapping to suicidal models best story driving porn game is dating my daughter since theres always an actual h scene in the update to make sure you get your moneys worth and its not always the same girl thats the problem with dual family only the cousin gets the content it seems like

Like I said, it might not be a good PORN game. Because, like you say, it's really not doing a good job of providing fapping fodder.

But, it's a fantastic love story.

 

[botc76]

That's....no.

It really doesn't. To wit, every single character has a distinct "voice" in the game, with fluency changing on whomever is speaking. Monologues are very well articulated and it all comes off as very "organic".

Your beef, I think, has mainly to do with PLOT rather then WRITING, as the pace of the game is so slow it might as well not be a porn game. But take away aaaaaall the porn, titillation and promises of sex, what are we left with?

A pretty good romance story. I have no idea what your gender is, so I am not going to make any assumptions, but have you by any chance read any Harliquin novels? They are very formulaic in that they are always feel good stories where the main leads are basically the top of the cream in terms of desirability. DF, by comparison, is the anti-Harliquin novel because it starts depressing and it's not interested in "fixing" the situation so much as providing a vehicle through which the romance in it can flourish.

It's very clear that the tone is trying to go for is "Bitter-sweet" and as such the immediately apparent character flaws that everyone has serve a purpose. It's planned rather then it being a failure of writing characters and THAT makes a difference since it actively contributes to the story.

You could argue that not a single one of those things lead to a good PORN game, but I really would contend that it necessarily means that it's a bad product.

Look pal or gal, if you think the writing in dual family is good then you really have no fucking clue.
The dev is nothing but a kid high on his own perceived genius.
He tries to write this deep, emotional story that really puts the characters through a wringer but the truth is, he fails, because he is just not good enough of a writer.

It's nothing but pretentious, soap opera level melodrama.

I wish people like you would just stop fucking encouraging him to go on with this stupid emo-bullshit.

There are great films and novels out there that deal with the topic of incest in a well-thought out and executed manner, if you are looking for something to think about, you should go and look for something like that.

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I really have no patience anymore for people defending this bullshit. Honestly, it's hard for me to believe that anybody outside of 15-18 year old Emos could read these drab and dreary scribbles and actually think it's good.

 

[1800 Mr. Tourture]

I have to say I'm a little disappointed with this update. there is not much new content and the stiff that was added was way shorter than normal. Mr C is one of the best devs so I trust him to do a great job, however I would prefer longer wait times if it meant more content... idk am I crazy?

 

[King Monkey Mon]

Like I said, it might not be a good PORN game. Because, like you say, it's really not doing a good job of providing fapping fodder.

But, it's a fantastic love story.

im not sure on love story but im probably not that experienced in that to be a judge

 

[anne O'nymous]

Your beef, I think, has mainly to do with PLOT rather then WRITING, [...]

I think he talk more about the dialog than the plot, and further more than the writing. Like you said, the writing itself is good, with each character having his own personality, but the dialog lines aren't really good. They show this difference in personality, but it's almost the only thing they show. Take Jenny by example. Alright, she's a whore craving for her son's dick but, really, did she need to say it almost every single sentences ? Instead of saying that she's a whore, she should just talk like one, it would have been better, while still depicting her own personality.

This said, if I don't make a mistake, the author isn't a native English speaker, so it's perhaps all what his English skills let him wrote at first. I thing about this, because some of the dialog lines from the latest updates seem way better than the one we had at first.

 

[1800 Mr. Tourture]

you do have a point after all there are numerous of good games coming out each month that can tie you over however i think the reason why their isnt much content in this update is due to the hospital being remodeled

Corruption is nothing if not ambitious. there are dozens of characters so I totally expect long dev times. the problem is when it feels more like a cruel tease than an actual update

 

[PinaColata]

can someone help me get megan date whatever i do i cant get her to date me at park ive showed her husand thespa brought megan home and fucked on balcony taken her to dae at park but not the night date someone please help me

 

[jaytee01]

What needs to happen in the playground (daytime) to progress??

 

[1800 Mr. Tourture]

What needs to happen in the playground (daytime) to progress??

it depends where you are in that story. have you met the children yet?

 

[VincentYamato]

First off, find the job advert (computer in your room), then get Simpson's corruption high enough so that when you talk to her, she puts in a word with the Principal.

Thks man I couldn't figure this out no matter how much I tried

Also,mind telling me who the busty blonde on your pic is pls!

 

[Vampira]

Thks man I couldn't figure this out no matter how much I tried

Also,mind telling me who the busty blonde on your pic is pls!

It's a morphed pic of Pandora Peaks and is basically how all women should look

 

[anne O'nymous]

WARNING users of my mod

Among the minor issues,

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, which have no effect on the game, I also made a rookie mistake when rewriting the mod.
Please, go to the configuration interface (SHIFT + HOME) select "Choice instead of randomization", and disable "When entering the police station". It will prevent the game to crash.

I'll continue testing everything and warn you when I release the fixed version.

Everything is now fixed, please, download

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.

 

[Lookingforthis]

Look pal or gal, if you think the writing in dual family is good then you really have no fucking clue.
The dev is nothing but a kid high on his own perceived genius.
He tries to write this deep, emotional story that really puts the characters through a wringer but the truth is, he fails, because he is just not good enough of a writer.

It's nothing but pretentious, soap opera level melodrama.

I wish people like you would just stop fucking encouraging him to go on with this stupid emo-bullshit.

I mean, if you could substantiate these criticisms maybe they would have weight? HOW does he fail? WHEN does he fail? WHERE is it pretentious or melodramatic?

A lot of people make the mistake of thinking that anything they don't like is utter shit, when simply it's just not their cup of tea. You my friend seem to fall among them, simply because all of your problems with it are encompassed in the last bit of your sentence:

"Stupid emo-bullshit."

The thing about, well, anything is that it's not so much what you, but how you do it. Obviosly, you don't have a problem with how well the dev does it, but simply with what he does.

The genre of Tragedies are testament enough that "emo" can be pulled off well.

 

[Swerze]

Does this have animations?

 

[Lookingforthis]

you know this is a corruption thread not defend my master kyle thread seriously and about the love story dating my daughter is the love incest game which love story has all characters in the book/game depressed to point of suicidal which love story has the MC acts like psychopath which love story has you dreaming about your mother only to fuck a skeleton quite frankly i dont think you can name any true love stories that has that in it my last comment to you was kinda to make you shut the fuck up and go to the dual family thread but you want to carry this pole polish to here? for the record if you respond to me in way i see unfit i will put you on ignore

So you would be fine if we continued this conversation in the DF thread?

 

[King Monkey Mon]

So you would be fine if we continued this conversation in the DF thread?

i would prefer that yes