VN Ren'Py Growing Thing's Up [v0.24c] [King]

[anarth_maddy]

really nice game to play. hardly waiting for the next update

 

[Otter123]

Very unsurprising based on the massive amount of Engrish in a 3 word title, but the game is also filled with Engrish.

 

[DanThaMan]

Very unsurprising based on the massive amount of Engrish in a 3 word title, but the game is also filled with Engrish.

It happens a lot, they seem to forget that the writing is just as important if not more important than the renders in a visual NOVEL, if the writing sucks then it ruins the whole thing.. just my opinion at least.

 

[Otter123]

It happens a lot, they seem to forget that the writing is just as important if not more important than the renders in a visual NOVEL, if the writing sucks then it ruins the whole thing.. just my opinion at least.

It's not bad enough that it makes it unplayable, unlike some other games, but it's still definitely noticeable.

Edit: Nvm, the more I play the worse it gets lol

 

[Niuul]

Hopefully they take the time to hire a proofreader if English isn't their first language. Having to reread dialog in your head so it's formatted properly gets annoying after awhile. Step 1 should always be the script if you're wanting your game to be a popular VN that gets support on patreon or whatever sub platform you choose to use.

 

[kinkbr]

It was mistake, it was ment to be "would not recommend". I fixed it, thanks for pointing out.

I hope to change your mind one day. I will do my best for it.

 

[kinkbr]

alot of the planned tags and the already unavoidable sex scene really makes me hesitant to try this, i just really want to know and the dev has yet to address it is, will there be anymore unavoidable sex scenes for ''plot reasons'' or will we have choices in who the MC fucks

Hello! The sex scene with Brenda is intended to be forced, all the others the player will be able to choose.

 

[kinkbr]

Hopefully they take the time to hire a proofreader if English isn't their first language. Having to reread dialog in your head so it's formatted properly gets annoying after awhile. Step 1 should always be the script if you're wanting your game to be a popular VN that gets support on patreon or whatever sub platform you choose to use.

Sure, we have already made corrections to the dialogue with the help of the community and will soon update the game file.

 

[kinkbr]

Ah another donobaiting game that has a patreon from v0.1. Surely this game wont be abandoned after an update or two once the creator sees he can swipe a benjie or so a month for doing nothing...

As I mentioned in some answers, I would love to work exclusively for the game. For this reason, I will not abandon a project that I take so much pleasure in making.

 

[kinkbr]

Great Renders!
This is one of few developers who knows what lighting is.
Most dont use it then it looks flat and dull.

Best comment ever. At least 3 directional lights per scene. haha

 

[kinkbr]

I would be interested to know if Bdsm, Female domination, Humiliation, Lesbian, Multiple Penetration, Spanking and Urination can be avoided when implemented.

The player will indeed be able to avoid certain situations, but some events that will occur in front of, and not with him will be part of the plot and cannot be avoided.

 

[kinkbr]

I like it, its a nice intro. Beautiful presentation, both audio and visual.

I'll reiterate what others have said, it needs a pass from a native english speaker, there are a number of places where its jarring to read. It's not bad though! And your humor is coming across very well, especially things like the drawn out pauses and awkward silences. Looking forward to getting to the hook that sets this apart from the common "horny doofus" games

A request: Labels on the main menu UI buttons (perhaps On:Hover), a confirmation on the exit button. And consider adding back the left/right/disable option for rollback; I play on touchscreen so its important!

I don't remember if I already replied to your message, but I will definitely make those changes. Thank you for the suggestions.

 

[kinkbr]

Can you tell me how to unlock the achievements or has this not been implemented yet?

It hasn't been implemented yet, sorry.

 

[BlasKyau]

The beginning has been enough for me to lose interest in the game.

If we add this answer to my question:

The player will indeed be able to avoid certain situations, but some events that will occur in front of, and not with him will be part of the plot and cannot be avoided.

I guess the only thing left is to wish you luck.

 

[kinkbr]

I see that harem is planned, I like that very much
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I see that lesbian and multiple penetration is planned and I don't like that I hope that those tags are completely avoidable? I also hope that you will never add any ntr

Your game looks very good and good luck

Don't worry, we won't have NTR, but we may see a strap-on.
thank you for the comment!

 

[Deleted member 4865569]

but we may see a strap-on.

Will that be avoidable?
I like for the mc to be the only one doing the penetrating, especially when it comes to harems.
Not into lesbian either, so will that be avoidable?

If everything is just going to be forced by the plot, then it loses my interest.
Will feel like I am playing a kinetic novel at that point where my choices don't matter at all.

ngl not sounding too appealing to me if you are not able to avoid things in a way they don't happen at all,
with, or without mc.

Appreciate you answering questions tho.

 

[kinkbr]

Planned tags: Multiple Penetration + no futanari tag = MC isn't the only dick though correct or is there lesbian play with strap-ons? Confused seeing group sex/multiple pen and harem. Not trying to be someone stirring shit up, just trying to clarify what the plan is so others will know as well. Some don't like the strap-on stuff too I assume.

I know that some themes will not please everyone, so these situations will be optional. It will be up to you.
Thank you for your comment.

 

[kinkbr]

Will that be avoidable?
I like for the mc to be the only one doing the penetrating, especially when it comes to harems.
Not into lesbian either, so will that be avoidable?

If everything is just going to be forced by the plot, then it loses my interest.
Will feel like I am playing a kinetic novel at that point where my choices don't matter at all.

ngl not sounding too appealing to me if you are not able to avoid things in a way they don't happen at all,
with, or without mc.

Appreciate you answering questions tho.

To give a better example, I'll tell you about a scene that's already written. There's a chance that the MC will arrive at a certain location, where he will hide and have the option to observe or not the scene that's happening in front of him. Because the player doesn't know what to expect, seeing a scene that might not please them can be avoided, but since it doesn't happen to him and is part of the plot, the scene will still exist.

 

[kinkbr]

Very enjoyable game. Looking forward to the next chapter. On the main page you have achievements listed. How do you unlock them or is this something that is being added later on?

Will be added soon!

 

[Cirilla1253]

Very interesting game, gotta say. Gorgeous renders, characters with their own personality, simple yet valid story. The texts do need some polishing, but hey, its a first version. Not a lot of content for me to rate the game, but so far it does deserve praise. Good luck to you dev, congrats! Obs. the redhead.... what a milf!