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Pacing issues, especially in terms of the development of relationships with all the various girls. That got remarked on a lot by people.
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- Jun 26, 2017
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I also complained about the inconsistency a lot. Primarily the fact that the protagonist started as this otherworldly being that was almost worshiped by everyone who saw him but within an update or two, he became just a random dude. It was more emphasized in the scene where he got seriously injured when there's no way he should have been based on his backstory.
There were also complaints about a specific trio of LIs that many, including myself, found obnoxious, boring and unlikable. The dev seemed to agree with our argument and if I remember correctly, he attempted to solve this by making one of them more interesting and the ring leader apologize in the next update after people complained.
There were also some cases of characters getting completely ignored despite the fact that they were obviously LIs. Dev clearly wanted to recitify this and started to include them more later because of it.
All in all, all the issues came down to a lack of planning and inexperience of the dev. Many people, including myself, liked the original despite it's faults. I generally think most of the issues will be solved with proper planning this time.
- Dec 26, 2019
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Ring leader? Lol, did I miss something? But yes, later on in the end of Chapter III, my goal was to fix a lot of things that seemed left out. Although, as I said, it happens towards the end of the Chapter.
There's a lot I wanted to fix, which is why I wanted to go through with a Remake, so to speak. And yes... I know... not everyone is behind this idea, hell a good chunk of people either abandoned ship or are waiting for a substantial amount of the story to release... or something along those lines. It's been said many times, and I know I'll never be able to convince everyone... but I'm hoping to have done my best with 0.0.1, and what's to come in 0.0.2 and so on.
It'l likely take a long while to get back to where the story should have continued with Chapter IV, but I think this time around there will be far more story, especially with the girls and other characters.
- Nov 11, 2019
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This is good news, because for me personally, pacing was a huge issue. Inside of a week of being on the planet, the MC had already had some sort of relationship/sex with like half the cast, and it was a bit whiplashy. Like, "whoa, slow down a bit eh?" (I realize the irony of this statement on a porn board). I liked what was there story-wise, but the parts with the girls felt a little too fast. All the crying also felt... I dunno... over-the-top? A lot of it felt out of place, like the storybeats leading up to the crying didn't always have the emotional weight to justify it imo. Otherwise I really enjoyed what was on offer, so giving more of that and fleshing the relationships out and making them feel like they're forming more naturally feels super good to me.
Keep up the good work!