- Thread starter TrippyDippity
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But having the exact same day with the exact same texts/pictures/animations only makes it artificially longer and more tedious to go through.
I would agree with SpeedyCat19 that the texts could change a little, maybe she could be less resistant or more into it with each passing day. That would make it more interesting. I personally just skipped everything that repeats and that on its own can be considered a negative since it feels like a waste of time.
Super fun read so far, I like having to go multiple days before a story development, feels like we've been on stranded for a long time! I do wish there was more boob focus though, she has such a nice rack!
Interesting game, seeing some shades of Netorare Survival Z in how you get info on what’s happening
The GF is super hot
The scenario is really hot
My issue with the game is as someone else mentioned, I feel like I don't have any frame of reference for the MC and GF's relationship. It feels more like the villain is stealing my sister than my girlfriend. For instance, why has the MC not initiated sex at all? For months? It's a step too far for believability. Not to mention that it seems like they never interact at all without the villain present or mentioned.
I love the GF tracker but I wasn't a fan of seeing the new sex interactions pop up. It makes it into a "check the tracker to see the new thing they did" situation instead of "check the tracker to see the things they MAY have done without you knowing" which is a slim difference but a huge one for me. It's the surprise of "WHAT?! When did she give him a handjob?! WTF!" that makes it nerve wracking to open the tracking app IMO. To facilitate that, there would have to be more actual working/flirting scenes. Once the sexual stuff really kicks off it seems all they do all day every day is blowjobs handjobs or kissing. It's a porn game, and thats the main sex delivery mechanism, so I get it, but it makes it an overload of the porn scenario instead of the gradual corruption that I personally think is hotter.
Not a fan of the sex-crazy drugs idea either, but I get it's a kink people have so thats a wash for me. Not sure about revealing the villain as a sex crazed manipulator right off the bat with his inner monologue. Yes, as players of the game we know where it's going. But some subtlety goes a long way. Instead of instantly knowing this guy is a pos stealing my girl, it'd be more interesting to see him as a fellow stranded wanderer working in a desparate situation with us when things go out of control.
All this is to say, I was really impressed with the game especially as a first time dev. I enjoyed it, the sexy parts were hot, I felt the dread necessary for this kind of game to function properly. I look forward to see it develop and your projects in the future.
The scenario is really hot
My issue with the game is as someone else mentioned, I feel like I don't have any frame of reference for the MC and GF's relationship. It feels more like the villain is stealing my sister than my girlfriend. For instance, why has the MC not initiated sex at all? For months? It's a step too far for believability. Not to mention that it seems like they never interact at all without the villain present or mentioned.
I love the GF tracker but I wasn't a fan of seeing the new sex interactions pop up. It makes it into a "check the tracker to see the new thing they did" situation instead of "check the tracker to see the things they MAY have done without you knowing" which is a slim difference but a huge one for me. It's the surprise of "WHAT?! When did she give him a handjob?! WTF!" that makes it nerve wracking to open the tracking app IMO. To facilitate that, there would have to be more actual working/flirting scenes. Once the sexual stuff really kicks off it seems all they do all day every day is blowjobs handjobs or kissing. It's a porn game, and thats the main sex delivery mechanism, so I get it, but it makes it an overload of the porn scenario instead of the gradual corruption that I personally think is hotter.
Not a fan of the sex-crazy drugs idea either, but I get it's a kink people have so thats a wash for me. Not sure about revealing the villain as a sex crazed manipulator right off the bat with his inner monologue. Yes, as players of the game we know where it's going. But some subtlety goes a long way. Instead of instantly knowing this guy is a pos stealing my girl, it'd be more interesting to see him as a fellow stranded wanderer working in a desparate situation with us when things go out of control.
All this is to say, I was really impressed with the game especially as a first time dev. I enjoyed it, the sexy parts were hot, I felt the dread necessary for this kind of game to function properly. I look forward to see it develop and your projects in the future.
I second all of this lol, even down to the feeling like a sister part -- was thinking that too, but maybe MC just really feels tired...
Though realistically would have definitely been more forceful at somepoint I think
