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Space_Cow99

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It's short, but who Jacques anyway if he was friend to the mother of the player? Was he father? Or someone who knew who it was.
I was wrapping my head around the story line of it, you were escorted to a discrete whore house to visit his chums or some of mom's old friends who wanted to have one last send off? Shouldn't you have dressed in room versus outside in hallway?

But from what hearing, they wanted to have around get laid. They could easily hire any of the whores for that sort of deal.

Experienced your first time with Jacques before going there? Makes sense to me.
Explain picture, he had featured cap which hid his face, I was confused why he hid was did have no eye? Scar? Women in question were not allowed to be educated In Napoleon era, they were to be submitted, married off or whores. Petition truth.

Other thing did she lock the door before going. Location would make sense. Is it apartment, does she have balcony? Or she have a cottage where she lives in and makes a living?
Her beauty is all she has, and relics of the past.

Jacques would pay her for her time?

Whore house was a short trip? Means She lived in city. So must be apartment/flat. Short walk.

Is there a timeline to be exact?

Reading this might beneficial:
← truth

← events

Napoleon was cruel to women when he was in control. Which why I have zero love for the guy. Cartoons now make absolute sense. Fat and short.
 

Imperial Eagle

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New teaser pornographic art piece is out on my Patreon beginning from Noblewoman tier!
The next update is planned to have more art, and it will be NSFW, as I've found a new generator which allows it.
 
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Joe Steel

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As a nit, the "Ministry of General Police" should read "Ministry of Justice" as they ran the police in Napoleonic France. Alternatively, you could make it "General Police Bureau" (which didn't exist, but sounds more plausible as a bureau than a ministry). It has no bearing on the game or story, but the Napoleonic historian in me compels to me to comment.
 

Loqic

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Sounds like a game I'd enjoy, I love the whole setting. Good luck with the development!
I hope you can find a way to fix the virus warning.
 

Imperial Eagle

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Sounds like a game I'd enjoy, I love the whole setting. Good luck with the development!
I hope you can find a way to fix the virus warning.
Thank you!
As for the virus warning, it's a false alarm and something that Windows defender has to fix on their part
Screenshot from Virustotal to show that the file contains no viruses.
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Blizzard99

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i like the idea of the story, but wtf is the pacing. everything happens so fast: no time spent on introspection by the MC, Jacques confesses his love for the MC after 4-5 pages, etc.
 

ffive

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I fear for the game which has to rely on the writing and plot to keep the player interested, it could use some more care and attention to both.

On technical level, the game mixes up present and past tenses, especially at the start. On story level... MC meets a guy who used to visit her mother, but the mother made sure he and MC didn't actually interact. The guy takes her to a brothel, then escorts her back home. Then on the next day shows up and declares "I love you!" and the MC can then to declare right then and there that she loves him and wants to be with him too, even though she spent no more than half an hour with him her entire life and doesn't know first thing about him.

On one hand i get that it's a porn game, but on the other hand this sort of pacing is emotional equivalent of "a guy comes to check house plumbing and three minutes later we are in a middle of a fuck". Given MC is supposed to be a completely pure virgin, it's... slightly off, to put it mildly.
 
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