- Sep 30, 2017
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Have played the latest version, and have some thoughts on this VN's development.
One, for the most part, it delivers. It drips with sex and gets the point across. Your visual storytelling is a strength.
The story is serviceable, but is marred by problems with grammar and spelling. Like I say to many devs, this can be fixed in post production.
I am however left wondering when we'll actually get some agency in choice and impacting the direction of the narrative. As it is, player choice has been sorely limited and has no effect on the story. We have been effectively experiencing a kinetic novel, and you might consider rebranding it as such.
This is not a bad thing, as the story content has been great thus far.
Keep up the great work.
One, for the most part, it delivers. It drips with sex and gets the point across. Your visual storytelling is a strength.
The story is serviceable, but is marred by problems with grammar and spelling. Like I say to many devs, this can be fixed in post production.
I am however left wondering when we'll actually get some agency in choice and impacting the direction of the narrative. As it is, player choice has been sorely limited and has no effect on the story. We have been effectively experiencing a kinetic novel, and you might consider rebranding it as such.
This is not a bad thing, as the story content has been great thus far.
Keep up the great work.
- Nov 20, 2017
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- Feb 18, 2018
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The other half of the monthly CG I posted on my patron. Posted here for obvious reasons.
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